SG1 Colour cover concept 2

Well, when I was in Tauranga for my Grandmother's funeral and the parents were all talking about blah (when I say parents, it's weird cause I'm in their age group now... :p ), so I wandered off to my room and did some drawing and came up with a few concept for Slayer's Game Colour cover- this idea I developed. See, my other ideas were great, but they only had ONE of these two in the cover, and I needed both- its the first comic. It had to say what the series was about. What's it about? A feud between these two school boys in a medieval fantasy world where there are dragons. OR Arkillian Dragons. And magic. There it is. All thouse elements at once.

I don't know HOW I'm gonna colour this. I may doom myself. It's gonna look so wicked in my head. Now I just have to draw and colour it ^^; *whimpers*

Sorry about the terrible quality- it's a photograph. Scanning takes aaaaaages.

Comments are appreciated. Please take into account that if I don't agree, or fully understand with your crit I will ask and it may sound like I'm complaining about it.