I really love her calm and almost dream like expression, it fits serenity well. I really like how you did her bangs, they have a more realistic fell to them. Crit: You may have wanted to make her left hand a little larger and add a bit more of a angle to it so it looked more like it was sitting.
Very nice work over all, I love how you protraded her so keep up the great work.
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Crit:
You may have wanted to make her left hand a little larger and add a bit more of a angle to it so it looked more like it was sitting.
Very nice work over all, I love how you protraded her so keep up the great work.
Crit time: I think her left hand is a bit small. But that's easily fixed, so no problems.
but thank you very much for the hint ^.~
But still, practice practice practice.
I'd love to see your new stuff.