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A scene from Atsushi Sakurai's video (yes, I've drawn him again). It really took me alot of time to do, a few days, maybe a week. Am I obsessed? lol. And I'm still not satisfied. I fixed that nose about a thousand times.>< I do like the angle though, it was interesting to do; and the feet behind him.^_^
My scanner made it blurry, don't know why.

Anyhow, I hope you still like the picture, but of course any criticizm is welcome. [emoticon]

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Submitted by: Sayonara Ame

Posted: Nov 6, 2006 10:52 am

Completed: Nov 6, 2006

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Galleries: Biseinen, Finished Work, General, Gothic, J-Rock, Portraits, Realism

Keywords: atsushi sakurai, street, high angle, sacrifice

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T.D.O.

Total Posts: 41

Nov 6, 2006 7:06 pm

I don't know who Atsushi Sakurai is, but I like this. I love the angle and your style of hatching. [emoticon]

P: I think the only criticism I have is maybe a bit more detail on the bricks/tiles? Not too much, since they aren't the focus, but maybe make shadows more prominent and give it more texture.

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T.D.O. (Reply)

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Nov 7, 2006 2:52 pm

^^; Actually, looking at this on a different computer, they seem to have more detail than I thought.

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Sayonara Ame (Reply)

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Nov 8, 2006 3:08 am

Thanks!^^ I was aware that the tiles need to be more detailed since there is nothing else on the pic other than Atsushi and the feet of the guy behind him. It deosn't show so well in the scan, and I've noticed that it's different on my computer and the one I use for the internet. I think I could do better than this but I'm glad you like it. [emoticon]

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karana kaou

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Nov 6, 2006 7:51 pm

Oh wow, I just love the expression. It's exacerbated by your use of black and white...This is one of my favorites from you [emoticon]

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"I am lost. I have gone to look for myself, if I get back, before I return, please tell me to wait." -Unknown

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Sayonara Ame (Reply)

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Nov 8, 2006 4:40 am

Thanks Heidi! [emoticon] I've been fixing it countless times, but it still isn't the same as his expression in the video. He didn't look so angry... I guess that's the main reason I'm not satisfied with this pic. But it means alot to me to know you like it.