Tears from thorns
Just started... Hope to get hints how to improve it before coloring
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As far as tips, I'd say his torso doesn't look like it's shaped quite right. It looks too strait. The shoulder area is not quite there yet either. I think you have the crease from the underarm placed too high.
this is nit picky but i also think the glass area may be too small. make it a bit bigger if you have room on the paper so that there's a little more space between him and the edge of the glass.
other than that, beautifully done.
The colored version is already uploaded to PD - you can find it in my gallery
I quite changed it though - don't know if it's for good or bad... I can see bunch of mistakes already, but I'd like to hear your opinion )
Now that I look at it, you are right about the shoulders... I'm afraid its rather late though.
On the colored version they look even worse I guess, haha
^ ^; Wow. I can't wait to see this in color. *spins* The elegance! *dies of bliss*
It's almost colored already, but I want put more effort in it