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When she closed her eyes and took a breath
warm light traveled across his face.
The weaver, through her song and dance,
bending time and space.

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This took me forever. I started her hair at the bottom and worked up, which was a mistake, and I couldn't think of anything to do for the background until I found a tutorial for the light online. I wish I remembered where, I'd link you all.

Airbrushed from scratch, I wanted to rip my hair off while doing this.

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Submitted by: SaikonoYume

Posted: Jan 12, 2007 5:17 am

Completed: Jan 12, 2007

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Galleries: Bishoujo, Finished Work, Original Art, Portraits

Keywords: anime, moonless age, reina, breathe

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Fyralath

Total Posts: 39

Jan 12, 2007 7:43 am

Beautiful conception and idea.
Luv the breath design and the BG who match perfectly with each other.
The hair is well done detailed.
My crit is when we look at the BG and breath contrast, the girl skin tone and hair need a bit more contrast and light effect for make a balanced overall contrast& light imo.
Her robe look a bit flat, maibe a less darker black tone for the robe with some shading will give it a bit more volume...just my taste.
Again Beautiful work.

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DowncastMercy

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Jan 12, 2007 5:42 pm

That's very pretty. I love the hair and her choker. The breath looks neat as well.

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"A peer can only give suggestions, but it's up to the writer to make that final decision." -- My 10th grade Honors English teacher, Mrs. Bagwell

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