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My second work in progress for this.
Done the lineart for Sora and half of Goofy, so far it's ok, I have a few issues with it I want crit on though-
Sora- Is there an easy way to make him NOT look like he's paralysed in space? More dynamic (I hope so- he's very stiff here)
Goofy- He looks glazed- not sure why. Usually I'm good with this, but he's cartoon so its difficult.
Um yes- and the Keyblade has an ACTUAL edge on it now which looks rather cool. I hate drawing hoes btw,... ^^;
OMG- Sora is on a tilt- I'm gonna have to correct that ![[emoticon]](http://www.paperdemon.com/images/forum/mysmilies/15pxyellow_bigeyes.gif)
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Submitted by: arkillian
Posted: May 22, 2007 12:15 pm
Completed: unknown
Critiques (9)Galleries: Action, Bishounen, Costume Design, Fantasy, Kingdom Hearts, Work In Progress
Keywords: kingdom hearts wip2, sora goofy donald duck kingdom hearts
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 BogusRedTotal Posts: 2848May 22, 2007 4:51 pmIts looking good so far. --- |
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 arkillian (Reply)Total Posts: 2930May 22, 2007 5:01 pmI can change some of the pose then that's fine- what would it take to unstiffen him? --- |
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I don't understand why- I drew this cause people WANTED to see it.|
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 angels_demonsTotal Posts: 479Jun 20, 2007 7:51 pmit´s really good! but Sora must be more O_O hum child ^^' it´s just he looks more older than the normel >:3 but everything is ok! xD keep up the good work! --- |
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arkillian (Reply)Total Posts: 2930Jun 20, 2007 8:20 pmWell, my children always tend to look a little older than they are. IT's a style thing. Anime is very youthfull. As soon as you put lines in, it ages the person. I think it suits him for more KH2- apparently its a KH2 outfit anyways --- |
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Trust me though- these pics ALWAYS look better as an origanal. Scanner funky them up for some reason...|
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angels_demons (Reply)Total Posts: 479Jun 21, 2007 2:25 pmyeah scanners always /&%#"!? piccys ¬¬ but still this picyy looks really awesome! xD --- |
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arkillian (Reply)Total Posts: 2930Jun 21, 2007 3:21 pmWelll -it's not that'sits bad, but it has a different look when not scanned. It's like a pencil pic- you REALLY can't appreciate it till you see the origanal. I think it's because the eye can translate it to an object rather than just light. *shrug* --- |
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angels_demons (Reply)Total Posts: 479Jun 21, 2007 3:43 pmamh,¬¬ but my scanner is really a monster ¬¬ he can mess up the most coolest piccy in the world ¬¬ --- |
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arkillian (Reply)Total Posts: 2930Jun 21, 2007 9:37 pmSounds like its time for a new scanner ^^; --- |
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angels_demons (Reply)Total Posts: 479Jun 22, 2007 8:43 amyep ¬¬ hehe --- |
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but ^^' i don't have money XP hehe
