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Well.... I worked on this one a bit more after I originally had called it good. I received some helpfull suggestions from paper demon members and tried to improve upon the original final. My thanks to Lloyd and Bogus Red for the critiques. I tried to darken up parts here and there to increase contrast. Let me know what you think. I will leave the other version up for a day or two so there is a basis for comparison available.
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Submitted by: zacula
Posted: Jul 26, 2005 7:27 pm
Completed: Jul 26, 2005
Critiques (41)Galleries: Fantasy, Finished Work, Original Art
Keywords: angel, fantasy, dark, magic, angel with new contrast
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 karana kaouTotal Posts: 1094Jul 26, 2005 7:16 pmYes yes, I like this version. The contrast really did it wonders. Great job. --- "I am lost. I have gone to look for myself, if I get back, before I return, please tell me to wait." -Unknown |
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karaJul 26, 2005 7:25 pmwow this 1 is way cooler than your other 1 the contrast is awsome |
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 BogusRedTotal Posts: 2854Jul 26, 2005 11:57 pmyes this is DEFINATELY looking a lot better. Especially that dark shape right by the hand that is holding the sword. I never even noticed the sword. Yeah that dark area really makes him pop out. great work --- |
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zacula (Reply)Total Posts: 646Jul 27, 2005 2:37 amThanks, It took a while longer then I'm used to spending on one pic but I like what I wound up with. |
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 DennisTotal Posts: 984Jul 27, 2005 1:25 amYou did an awesome job with the contrast! The figure really stands out now and catches the viewer's eye instantly when one gazes upon this wonderful piece of art. You deserve an award for this if Paper Demon gave them. --- |
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zacula (Reply)Total Posts: 646Jul 27, 2005 2:34 amThanks, it would be the lazy award for trying to call the other one finished. I do like it much better now too. glad I listened to you. |
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 MinimaidTotal Posts: 1917Jul 27, 2005 2:56 amYes, this is a lot easier to read and see clearly. I'm really loving this picture... Aweomse composition and such. I'm sorry I didn't get time to critique the last one properly. --- |
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zacula (Reply)Total Posts: 646Jul 27, 2005 3:00 amLast one doesn't matter any way it is obsolete. I'm glad you were able to comment on this one though. Thanks Minimaid |
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 KichiTotal Posts: 1845Jul 27, 2005 1:47 pmwow, this is awesome! --- |
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 Mallie3Total Posts: 1450Jul 27, 2005 2:57 pmI am so happy with this Zac this is awesome!!! You know I have never seen anything like this one...Very good!! I ...don't know what to say it is just so good! I am glad you made changes it looks great!! Nicely done!!! ---
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zacula (Reply)Total Posts: 646Jul 29, 2005 3:06 pmThanks It is nice to hear you like the revised version as well. |
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 thedemonsessTotal Posts: 530Jul 27, 2005 2:59 pmWondeful job, Zacula. You've done a wonderful job on the contrast in this picture. It really shows that you've put a l0t of work into this one. --- |
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 EvilBunnySlippersTotal Posts: 554Jul 28, 2005 1:17 amWow...all the improvements you made really show. I really like the added contrast and the thick lines around your character as now he is far more visible. I really love the reflections in the water and his armor..there is SO much detail in this, I LOVE it...excelent job!! --- The two most common elements in the universe are hydrogen and stupidity. -EBS |
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zacula (Reply)Total Posts: 646Jul 29, 2005 3:50 pmThanks I'm glad you noticed the reflections, The one on the armor I thought of in the concept stage. The one on the water came as an after though, I almost left it out. |
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 Lady Anime79Total Posts: 2839Jul 28, 2005 11:47 amYes, Zac, this looks so much better. He really seems to pop out more this way. He isn't fading into the rest of the picture. Great job. It looks pretty dang cool. Sorry...I know that sounds corny, but I am trying to watch my language. --- Laughter is the best medicine and your face is curing the world. |
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zacula (Reply)Total Posts: 646Jul 29, 2005 4:06 pmThanks, I liked the original but I do think this turned out muchbetter with the more effort I put forth. It is hard to edit language, Such as removing curse words. I myself still speak them fluently but best of luck to with removing them. |
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 GuestieTotal Posts: 214Aug 9, 2005 2:11 amI always prefer darker versions of pictures, smash up that contrast and let the good times roll... well... you know what I mean... --- |
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zacula (Reply)Total Posts: 646Aug 9, 2005 3:06 amI think I know what you mean, if what you mean is what I'd mean if I said the same and meant nothing other than your original meaning. ... I appreciate your words bud. |
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Guestie (Reply)Total Posts: 214Aug 9, 2005 3:27 amJust what I meant...! --- |
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Monk-MonkTotal Posts: 95Aug 9, 2005 1:05 pmYour drawings are supercoolawsomeistic! (my new word meaning it's awsome!! |
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zacula (Reply)Total Posts: 646Aug 9, 2005 2:16 pmHmmmm..... Before art was always more of a hobby, sort of a second choice, Lately it has become more and more an interesting prostect for a career. Thanks for the the comment and the great word. |
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Aug 24, 2005 1:44 pmYou have some amazing talent and as for the contrast, its perfect. it has the right qualities and lighting . i love it! |
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zacula (Reply)Total Posts: 646Aug 25, 2005 3:18 amThank you so very much, a very nice comment to find waiting for me. |
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 Jill V. -S.T.A.R.S.Total Posts: 2407Nov 7, 2005 9:23 pmWow you did a great job on this! I especially like that little face on his shoulder pad. --- Yes we can! |
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zacula (Reply)Total Posts: 646Nov 13, 2005 4:55 amThank you very much. I like that part of this one too. |
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 Stealth NerdTotal Posts: 1266Nov 10, 2005 10:53 amWow. I love it; very dramatic. He sort of looks like an avenger type of angel(well duh)? Kind of like Jason with long hair and wings and very large muscles. This is so awesome! How do ya do it? ^_^ --- *Legend of Zelda makes me not die* |
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zacula (Reply)Total Posts: 646Nov 13, 2005 5:14 amThank you I wanted him to seem a little darker and possibly more violent then the traditional notion of them. |
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Stealth Nerd (Reply)Total Posts: 1266Nov 14, 2005 12:59 pmYou definitely succeeded! --- *Legend of Zelda makes me not die* |
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AmericanRejectTotal Posts: 37Jul 25, 2006 8:24 pmWow......wow..........woooow... |
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 frubafreak17Total Posts: 170Jan 19, 2007 2:14 pmthere are no words that can describe how marvelous this is! --- "Life's all about taking risks... but it's the fear that stops us from living." - ^_^ |
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