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Wrath_by_Sayonara_Ame

Wrath

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Ok so I am going to add another character. I thought to turn it into sort of a wallpaper, but basically it's finished. You're still welcome to tell me if anything's wrong with it.

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Submitted by: Sayonara Ame

Posted: Nov 13, 2005 1:23 am

Completed: Nov 5, 2012

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Galleries: Finished Work, Fullmetal Alchemist, General, Mythical Creatures

Keywords: wrath, fma, fullmetal alchemist, humunculus

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Lady Anime79

Total Posts: 2839

Nov 13, 2005 8:41 am

You know, I do think adding another character would help fill up that space. I am not too familiar with this anime, so I have no idea who I would put back there. I love that saying you put down at the bottom. "You never know how it feels to die so young." That is beautiful and one I take to heart considering one of the reasons behind my emotional upset recently. Your drawing is beautiful and that saying makes it powerful. You can put another character back in the trees if for no other reason than to settle your own uneasiness about it. It truly is a wonderful drawing Maria. All my love. ^_^

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Sayonara Ame  (Reply)

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Nov 14, 2005 4:27 am

You read it! I'm glad you think it adds meaning to it. One day it just hit me, but I didn't want to make it too pronounced, that's why I put it there. Hmm.. you think I should make it more visible or leave it this way?
And concerning the character I might have an idea of what should be there, so I'm going to work on it soon as possible. Thank you for your comments hun. I appreciate it, you always manage to uplift my spirit. [emoticon] [emoticon]
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Lady Anime79  (Reply)

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Nov 14, 2005 8:59 am

Yes love, I did read it. [emoticon] And I think you should keep it the way you have it. That way you can be sure that people are really looking at your drawing instead of just skimming over it. It is truly wonderful. You always have wonderful ideas. And I know whatever you decide to do with this one (whether you add something else or leave it how it is) it will always be a memorable piece of art. All my love. ^_^

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Sayonara Ame  (Reply)

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Nov 15, 2005 7:18 am

Why thank you Kristy, you make me feel like I'm a great artist! [emoticon] And I think you're right about the sentence.
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Lady Anime79  (Reply)

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Nov 15, 2005 9:17 am

Well I am glad I can do that because you ARE a great artist. We are always our own worst critics. Keep up the awesome work hun. Your drawings always amaze me. ^_^ All my love.

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Saiyangirl4ever

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Nov 13, 2005 9:18 am

This piccy is beautiful!!! Though I agreewith LA,maybe another character would make the piccy better... [emoticon] But that`s your piccy! I love your coloring style!Oh and the words are very touching...*sniff*Great job hun! [emoticon] Mwah!

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Sayonara Ame  (Reply)

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Nov 14, 2005 4:52 am

Aww thank you. I'm glad you like it. I wanted this to be sad even though the colors are bright and everything seems idyllic, since I feel pity for this kid. lol I'm glad you like my coloring, I decided to try out something new, and color the trees in more detail. [emoticon]
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MoonDemon

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Nov 13, 2005 1:35 pm

Love it, babe!!! I think maybe Ed spying on Wrath from the trees would look cool. When he firsts meets Wrath, Ed is massively suspicious of him. But that's just my thoughts, It looks Fabulous!!! [emoticon]

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THIS TOO SHALL PASS!!!

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Sayonara Ame  (Reply)

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Nov 14, 2005 4:30 am

That should be funny, heheh! Although I had another idea in mind. Thank you for your critic hun, and thanks so much for the fav. [emoticon]
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MoonDemon  (Reply)

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Nov 14, 2005 5:52 am

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Can't wait to see what u have in mind!!! I'm sure if/when you get around to it, it'll rock!!!

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THIS TOO SHALL PASS!!!

Minimaid

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Nov 13, 2005 5:52 pm

I agree. I think another character, or some birds in the background would be wonderful.

Also, Wrath's left hand should have a little more length in the fingers. It's mismatched with the other side.

But I must say - I love the reflective colours you've worked into this piece. They really bring it to life. Awesome work!!

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Sayonara Ame  (Reply)

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Nov 14, 2005 4:59 am

Hey Robin. Long time on talk.
I am happy you like it! [emoticon]

Umm... about the fingers, I think I needed to make them shorter on the left rather than otherwise, anyhow I'll see what I can do about it. I'll fix what I can. Thanks for your comment hun!^_^
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Minimaid  (Reply)

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Nov 14, 2005 11:50 am

no, I have to disagree there. on our right, his fingers look a little stumpy to me.

Yeah, I've been fairly absent... popping in now and again to comment on people's work. I'm working on Christma presents right now, and trying to deal with some of the stress from work - so my days are packed.

Hope you're doing well!

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Sayonara Ame  (Reply)

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Nov 15, 2005 7:07 am

Ok then. Thanks anyway. [emoticon]

Everything is pretty much as usual with me. I am pretty busy too, with my HW/classes so I guess I'll have to cut down the time I spend here.

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Tomboy Girl

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Nov 20, 2005 3:55 pm

OMG!!!!!!!! FMA RULES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Sayonara Ame  (Reply)

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Nov 22, 2005 5:50 am

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gatorchas

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Feb 6, 2006 5:50 am

love the background in this ...she came out very good to ...awesome job.... [emoticon]

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Sayonara Ame  (Reply)

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Feb 6, 2006 7:05 am

Thanks. [emoticon] Glad you like him. Yes, it's a boy, not a girl. ^.^ I wanted to do the trees with as much detail as I could. I think the arms are not so good and I need to fix that glove thing.

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