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A clown I drew about a month ago. People keep telling me she looks like Harlequin. ^^, I think her face looks too doll-like. =/

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Submitted by: Lasore Delecroix

Posted: Feb 21, 2006 9:19 pm

Completed: unknown

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Galleries: Bishoujo, Fantasy, Finished Work, Original Art

Keywords: clown, doll, marionette, harle, harlequin, clown

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BogusRed

Total Posts: 2895

Feb 21, 2006 10:14 pm

I like the way you've used the pencil to vary the thickness of your pencil strokes. The drapery looks pretty nice too. Her face looks great. I liker her expression. Her left hand looks strange though. The arm looks too thin and the hand too small. I'm not quite sure what is happening with her feet also. Is she standing on her tip toes?
Nicely done. And welcome to PaperDemon.com [emoticon]

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Lasore Delecroix (Reply)

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Feb 22, 2006 5:30 pm

Yes, she's on her tip toes. ^^, I'm not very skilled at drawing hands. That's something I really need to work on. Thanks for the critique and welcome. =^.^=

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BogusRed (Reply)

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Feb 22, 2006 5:35 pm

You're welcome!

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lost_kitsune

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Feb 21, 2006 10:28 pm

OH I LOVE IT! [emoticon] yeh, her face looks like she is a possessed marionette! I LOVE IT!!!! you did very well on the shape and shading, and again, I LOVE IT!!!! very very good in my book

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Lasore Delecroix (Reply)

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Feb 22, 2006 5:31 pm

Thank you. ^_^

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Jill V. -S.T.A.R.S.

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Feb 22, 2006 2:11 pm

I like what you've done with this. ANd hey what do you know she does look alittle like Harlequin. I like the subtle shading too and the clothes look nice as well. All in all you did a great job! [emoticon] And Hi and welcome to PD!

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Lasore Delecroix (Reply)

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Feb 22, 2006 5:32 pm

Thanks for the critique and welcome. ^_^ Glad to be here.

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Jill V. -S.T.A.R.S. (Reply)

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Feb 22, 2006 10:03 pm

You're most welcome and I hope you have fun here. [emoticon]

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Cokekitty

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Apr 13, 2006 7:19 am

You know, I would have bet anything I critiqued this picture the last time I saw it. [emoticon] Oh well, I'll do it now! No time like the present, after all. Anyway, very nice work. She's very pretty. And I agree with Lost_Kitsune in saying that she looks like a possessed marionette.