Dolphiny Sora

Actually his tail needs to be longer I think. I would make the tail as long as normal legs and the tips of your fingers extend to mid thigh, they seem about at knee- level here. Hope that helps ;D

His tail looks like It needs to be a little longer, but the proprotions look right to me. The coloring you have done so far looks great too. Just make Sora's tail longer and It'll be good. ^.~ *FAVES*

The Breast/shoulder area seem abit big but it could be just me

I know how you feel I'm not so great with proportions but i hope this helps. I think his hands are a bit big and also his head. Two heads should fit in his torso here it looks as if only one and a half can and also I think his tail should be a bit longer. anyways I hope that helped you out

I think so far you are doing pretty good. this is a REALLY hard pose.

I did do a little visual crit for you but its such a tough position that i don't think i even got it right.

Just a couple things to really watch for is his hips are a little wide, the shapes of his forearms need some reshaping. And also the mermaid part could probably be a little longer.

ooOOooo, the color is great! I think his body is a bit short though, that's all! It's wonderful!! xD

wow, must fav

His upper body is just fine, to me. And I realli like his face, but I think the fish like part (I know, but it's 9 in the morning do you realli expect me to remember what it's called ) I think it's too short and thins out a little too quickly at the bottom. I think thats all you need to fix. I hope that helped.