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Please, guys all comments are appriciated and replied in my ALLL artworks. I need critics to be better in art^^ thankiess [emoticon]

So,Its the girl from my other pics. Shes my own character and i'll draw a manga with her. AAAND, this its an extraordinary one, bcause i started and finished it in one day. ^^yay

C*O*L*O*R*S* A*R*E S*O B*E*A*U*T*I*F*U*L

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Submitted by: m o n i e e

Posted: Jun 27, 2006 7:09 am

Completed: unknown

crit Critiques (10)

Galleries: Bishoujo, Finished Work, Original Art, Portraits

Keywords: sitting in the window, anime

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PookyWooky

Total Posts: 522

Jun 27, 2006 8:16 am

Well, I can tell this pose is a toughie...
(I would never attempt it cuz I suck :yes [emoticon]
Anyways, I think her feet were a tad bit too small.
The arm in the back is perfect, but the one in front looks slightly off at her wrist.
The background is beautiful like her hair...
(Loves the hair)
And her clothing and everything else is awesome.
I hope that helped...
If it didn't, I suck at writing critiques too.

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m o n i e e  (Reply)

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Aug 25, 2007 8:17 am

Hmm you're right.. but it was a loong time ago i drew this.. and i dare to say that ive got a little better at drawing, nad i see just now what you've say. (i thought it when i first read your comment just didnt comment back..until now..XD sorry...)
So thank you for the advices! I love this kind of comments ! [emoticon]

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" I didnt lose my mind, i sold it on eBay. "

Nem olyan könnyű az, töki!! *paff*

PookyWooky  (Reply)

Total Posts: 522

Sep 1, 2007 9:35 am

Lmao!
Awwe, no worries.
I haven't been at paperdemon in so long.
I forgot all about it.
You just brought me back.
Ahahaha.

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WildeKarde

Total Posts: 188

Jun 27, 2006 9:20 am

Nice work, I can't see anything I'd change or fix. You should honestly take up water color to color in your work it will compliment that soft feel you have. Just a warning when using water color don't go overboard with the water. And get the water color in tubes.

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m o n i e e  (Reply)

Total Posts: 257

Aug 25, 2007 8:14 am

Thank you for the advices! Ive done one(the little sparrow) on a cloth and it turnwed out well.

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" I didnt lose my mind, i sold it on eBay. "

Nem olyan könnyű az, töki!! *paff*

Regan

Total Posts: 44

Jun 27, 2006 8:21 pm

[emoticon] It's beautiful. And thats all I have to say about that.

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m o n i e e  (Reply)

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Aug 25, 2007 8:12 am

^^Thank you!

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" I didnt lose my mind, i sold it on eBay. "

Nem olyan könnyű az, töki!! *paff*

LODAEV

Total Posts: 15

Jun 28, 2006 5:27 am

The picture is very beautiful. You have a nice eye... Comic Sans is inccredibly disgusting though. Yichk....

www.bancomicsans.com

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m o n i e e  (Reply)

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Aug 25, 2007 8:12 am

Thank oyu.
I think thats no problem with comic sans espec. its one of my favourites.

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" I didnt lose my mind, i sold it on eBay. "

Nem olyan könnyű az, töki!! *paff*

gatorchas

Total Posts: 853

Jun 28, 2006 5:53 am

This is a very good picture... the pose is awesome and not easy to pull off.. the flowers look great and the whole thing work very well together......awesome work..... [emoticon]

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