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Finally colored! I was trying to convey the melancholic and dreamy feeling of the anime. It was really sweet to see Kuro rin and Fai actually getting along. 'Miu' by Buck-Tick was playing on my comp while I was coloring, that song really put me in a dreamy mood... [emoticon]

I was trying to color it anime style but ended up doing my usual coloring style. I just can't grasp it for some reason. Anywho, hope you like it.
I think it's a better tittle no?

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Submitted by: Sayonara Ame

Posted: Jul 11, 2006 8:26 am

Completed: Jul 11, 2006

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Galleries: Biseinen, Bishounen, Finished Work, Portraits, Tsubasa: RESERVoir CHRoNiCLE

Keywords: tsubasa reservoir chronicle, caught in a reverie, fye, kurogane

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Horokeu

Total Posts: 169

Jul 11, 2006 12:23 pm

It looks anime style... kinda... xD It's really good though! I like it.

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Sayonara Ame (Reply)

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Jul 12, 2006 2:59 am

Thank you Horokeu! [emoticon] I like the way it looks overall but I couldn't get the coloring look flat especially the hair and folds in the clothes. I still hate Kurogane's hakama because it's so smudged.

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Horokeu (Reply)

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Jul 12, 2006 8:03 am

It looks great overall! haha!

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Sayonara Ame (Reply)

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Jul 13, 2006 1:04 am

Thanks. [emoticon]

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Mallie3

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Jul 12, 2006 10:08 am

This is beautifully done. Nice job with this one. The Wine glass looks really real also...I couldn't help but notice. They look kinda...spacey...like they don't reall care what is going on [emoticon] Nice work dear

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Sayonara Ame (Reply)

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Jul 13, 2006 1:29 am

Hehe, I used to draw still life alot so the glass came out looking realistic.xD And the reason why they look spacey is that they're listening to a song sung by the woman who owns the bar and they're kinda each in his own reverie. [emoticon] I just didn't draw their surroundings because I couldn't fit it in the composition and I just wanted it to create a feeling that it's not real... Anyhow, you need to watch the anime... Thanks very much Mallie!*glomp*

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Mallie3 (Reply)

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Jul 13, 2006 11:30 pm

No problem darling [emoticon]

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Minimaid

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Jul 12, 2006 11:42 am

Your proportions are getting better and better, Atlantis! THis is a lovely piece, and the colouring you've chosen works beautifully! [emoticon]

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Sayonara Ame (Reply)

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Jul 13, 2006 1:42 am

Thank you my dear! [emoticon] Methinks I'm improving with time, and thanks to looking at other people's art and learning stuff... I'm so glad you like it and the coloring.

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Zironix

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Jan 13, 2007 4:31 pm

Wow! This is really nice! I like the way you coloured the blond hair. :3 one thing I would've changed is the pointing hand. It points to the edge of the picture, leading the eyes away from the guy. [emoticon] The back-to-back idea is nice though. I dunno the anime so I can't say much else...but the background is so cool! @_@ S'all...starry and dreamy...the title's a perfect fit.

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Sayonara Ame (Reply)

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Jan 16, 2007 4:32 am

Thanks Zironix. [emoticon] Sorry but I've finished it a long time ago and I'm not planning to change it now. I really liked his gesture so I wanted to draw him like this. Also it makes you wonder what's he pointing at. I appreciate the comment though. I'll be more aware of the composition next time.

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Zironix (Reply)

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Jan 17, 2007 6:43 pm

I know eh? Getting advice when stuff is done, sucks. T_T But I do it too, so I shouldn't complain... [emoticon]

I know what you mean! His pointing does make you wonder...I sure was wondering at one point!

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DragonAceSg7

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Nov 10, 2007 1:38 pm

I like the expression on Fai's face. Though I think I almost like the black and white better than the colored version. Fai's hair and fingers came out really nice. Not completely sure Kuro's face looks all right but that might be the angle he's looking at. While I like the B&W better the colors are nice.

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Sayonara Ame (Reply)

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Nov 16, 2007 4:20 am

Thanks for the comment:3 You're right, the b&w version is better in a way. The color lost the some of the sharpness and the figures look cut and pasted, which is true btw, lol. And Kuro does look awkward [emoticon] But I'm glad you can still find good things about it

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DragonAceSg7 (Reply)

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Dec 9, 2007 9:51 pm

[emoticon] I'm glad you shared it. It certainly looks the set up to an interesting conversation.

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Sayonara Ame (Reply)

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Dec 10, 2007 4:33 am

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