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The dark one is frightened; she doesn't want to be a raindrop. She doesn't want to fall from the sky.

The light one is vain; she knows people lie in the grass just for the chance to see her float by. It's nice to be a cloud in the sky.

I really don't like this picture.

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Submitted by: Wrae Ann

Posted: Aug 28, 2006 8:26 pm

Completed: May 21, 2005

crit Critiques (18)

Galleries: Angst, Fantasy, Finished Work, Original Art

Keywords: rain, clouds, rainclouds, lawl, rainclouds

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Keenarnor

Total Posts: 2148

Aug 29, 2006 12:30 pm

You don't like this picture! [emoticon] but it's great!

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"...Then he used his fight money to buy two of every animal and put them on a boat and beat the crap out of them! And from that point forward any time a bunch of animals were together it's called a 'Zoo'!"

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Wrae Ann  (Reply)

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Aug 29, 2006 10:15 pm

Thank you so much! I just don't like it. :x There's so many things wrong with it!

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All the roads we have to walk are winding, and all the lights that lead us there are blinding. There are many things that I would like to say to you, but I don't know how...because maybe you're gonna be the one that saves me. And after all, you're my wonderwall.

Keenarnor  (Reply)

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Aug 30, 2006 12:13 pm

Maybe so, but it's blue, and I like blue [emoticon]

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"...Then he used his fight money to buy two of every animal and put them on a boat and beat the crap out of them! And from that point forward any time a bunch of animals were together it's called a 'Zoo'!"

Wrae Ann  (Reply)

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Aug 31, 2006 8:30 am

Ha-ha, but who doesn't like blue. [emoticon] Come on!

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All the roads we have to walk are winding, and all the lights that lead us there are blinding. There are many things that I would like to say to you, but I don't know how...because maybe you're gonna be the one that saves me. And after all, you're my wonderwall.

Keenarnor  (Reply)

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Aug 31, 2006 12:17 pm

Random guy: I don't!
Me: *shoots* yeah i think everyone does

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"...Then he used his fight money to buy two of every animal and put them on a boat and beat the crap out of them! And from that point forward any time a bunch of animals were together it's called a 'Zoo'!"

Dollmaker

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Aug 29, 2006 6:40 pm

What don't you like about this picture? I think it's great. What did you use to color it. I wanna say watercolors, but I don't think I'm right. [emoticon]

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Wrae Ann  (Reply)

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Aug 29, 2006 10:18 pm

Thank you so very much for the favorite! I really appreciate it!

The raindrop's hair should be more affected by gravity, both the inking and the coloring were rushed and have a lot of errors, and I hate the cloud's hair and dress. :x Those are the main reasons I don't like it. There are more, though...

As for the coloring, it was just colored pencils. n_n; I wish I knew how to use watercolors!! That would be so cool!

Thanks again!

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All the roads we have to walk are winding, and all the lights that lead us there are blinding. There are many things that I would like to say to you, but I don't know how...because maybe you're gonna be the one that saves me. And after all, you're my wonderwall.

Dollmaker  (Reply)

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Aug 30, 2006 5:23 pm

Hey, no sweat. It deserves a favorite in my book. :3.

Well, for Raindrop's hair, I just figured she was only starting to fall. Gravity and such take a second to really show effect. That's just me, though.

Yeah, I wish I could use watercolors, too. [emoticon] One of these days. And man, if I could get that kind of effect from colored pencils...sheesh. You rock, man. :3

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Wrae Ann  (Reply)

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Aug 31, 2006 8:39 am

Thank you again!

And for future reference, I'll probably be using that explanation as an excuse for the gravity in this picture. [emoticon]

As for coloring with colored pencils, if I may be so bold, I'm confident that you could color in the same style! All you have to do is hold the pencil at an angle (so it's not sharp and doesn't cause lines) and start at the darkest part of the shadow. Then color toward the chosen lightsource and get lighter with the pressure as you go!

Did that make sense? I hope so. :x

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All the roads we have to walk are winding, and all the lights that lead us there are blinding. There are many things that I would like to say to you, but I don't know how...because maybe you're gonna be the one that saves me. And after all, you're my wonderwall.

Dollmaker  (Reply)

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Aug 31, 2006 6:21 pm

You're totally welcome (and that's cool with me. I'm glad I could help. [emoticon] )

Hrm. I may have to break out the crayolas again. I've been coloring with my five megatank pens lately, and I love them, but the color range is so limited, it doesn't work for me. [emoticon] But I will try your method. Thanks!

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Wrae Ann  (Reply)

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Sep 1, 2006 11:35 am

Any time! I hope it works for you! X3

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All the roads we have to walk are winding, and all the lights that lead us there are blinding. There are many things that I would like to say to you, but I don't know how...because maybe you're gonna be the one that saves me. And after all, you're my wonderwall.

Dollmaker  (Reply)

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Sep 1, 2006 5:45 pm

That makes two of us. [emoticon]

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Monshterrabbit

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Aug 31, 2006 4:31 am

Oh, but it definitely captures your style and sense of fashion.

It's delicate and seemingly well planned.
You have very confident lines.

The only thing that bothers me a little bit about this picture is the placing of the characters, it's not very rounded out.

But still elegant and pleasant to look at.

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"I fink she is tarking about da pedophile shex." ~ Dave Kelly author and illustrator of Awesome Gamerz.

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Wrae Ann  (Reply)

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Aug 31, 2006 6:04 pm

Thank you very much! XD The cloud doesn't seem very much like my regular style, I think. :x I might redo that drawing someday...

Confident lines? Does this mean my lines aren't shaky? (I'm sorry, I don't talk to artists much, and I don't understand a lot of the terms people use. Please don't think I'm dumb!)

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All the roads we have to walk are winding, and all the lights that lead us there are blinding. There are many things that I would like to say to you, but I don't know how...because maybe you're gonna be the one that saves me. And after all, you're my wonderwall.

Monshterrabbit  (Reply)

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Aug 31, 2006 9:45 pm

It's okay, I'm completely self taught, so it took me awhile to pick up all the artist lingo too...

And yeah, confident lines means that they are clean and precise. It's considered very professional to have confident lines if that's the look you're going for.

I still love this picture though.

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"I fink she is tarking about da pedophile shex." ~ Dave Kelly author and illustrator of Awesome Gamerz.

Wrae Ann  (Reply)

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Sep 1, 2006 4:02 pm

Well, thank you very much, then! Yes, that is something I definitely want. X3

And being self-taught is something we have in common. [emoticon] How neat!

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All the roads we have to walk are winding, and all the lights that lead us there are blinding. There are many things that I would like to say to you, but I don't know how...because maybe you're gonna be the one that saves me. And after all, you're my wonderwall.

Monshterrabbit  (Reply)

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Sep 1, 2006 9:11 pm

I like that being self-taught gives me a more independant sense that what I make is truly my own.

Y'know?

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"I fink she is tarking about da pedophile shex." ~ Dave Kelly author and illustrator of Awesome Gamerz.

m o n i e e

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Jan 21, 2007 5:21 am

Wow! REallly nice!
I love the blue in this.
Nice pic [emoticon]

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