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OMG this is taking FOREVER... I am being overly anal with the details this time around ... but I think it's paying off

T-minus about 24 man hours dedicated to painting thusfar...
Actual working hours not hours where I break to nap or something... [emoticon] PP

Add about 4 hours to sketch and Ink...
There's a lot of time in this one. Whew

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Submitted by: fablespinner

Posted: Oct 10, 2006 3:04 am

Completed: Oct 10, 2006

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Galleries: Biseinen, Bishounen, Misc Literary Works, Romance, Shounen-Ai, Work In Progress

Keywords: nightrunner, alec, seregil, [wip-1] nightrunner

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XaKo

Total Posts: 22

Oct 11, 2006 7:28 am

this is realy amezing allready!!I relly love the details and shadows + pose! =D

andd if I can say one lil thing that bugs me a bit... is the midle finger of that woman it's too bold maby you can make that part(on the right side) a lil darker with shadows so you can see it's bent over the hand of that boy..(hope that made sence lolx) ) anyways can't Wait to see it finished! <3

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fablespinner  (Reply)

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Oct 11, 2006 11:31 am

There is no woman in this picture.

Seregil is supposed to have "bold hands" he's a swordsman. (I presume you're talking about Seregil. The Man with the long hair.)

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XaKo  (Reply)

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Oct 12, 2006 5:42 am

ups X_X sorry hope your not offended by that ..^^;;;; and yeah but one finger is thicker then the others... but i'll just shut up X_X -_-;;;

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Oct 13, 2006 1:03 am

Nope not offended and I think what's throwing you is the foreshortening on that digit.

It's sticking out closer to the camera than the others... and because it's overlapping the ring and index fingers it looks thicker (and it is)

It's partically perspective, camera angle and probably a little over exaggeration on my part too.

Not enough I'm gonna worry about it after the fact though. ^_^

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