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Tears_from_thorns_by_Seladore

Tears from thorns

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Just started... Hope to get hints how to improve it before coloring

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Submitted by: Seladore

Posted: Dec 27, 2006 7:00 am

Completed: Dec 27, 2006

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Galleries: Fantasy, Original Art, Work In Progress

Keywords: rose thorns, tears from thorns

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eegirlee

Total Posts: 478

Dec 27, 2006 2:32 pm

You astound me. [emoticon] Your figure drawing is so perfect!!! Um, I guess you could add leaves to the rose...but you probably already thought of that.
^ ^; Wow. I can't wait to see this in color. *spins* The elegance! *dies of bliss*

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Seladore  (Reply)

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Dec 27, 2006 8:20 pm

Thanks )
It's almost colored already, but I want put more effort in it

BogusRed

Total Posts: 2895

Feb 1, 2007 11:16 pm

I absolutely love this. I don't know how i missed it. I'm adding this to my favs. I can't wait to see the colored version.

As far as tips, I'd say his torso doesn't look like it's shaped quite right. It looks too strait. The shoulder area is not quite there yet either. I think you have the crease from the underarm placed too high.

this is nit picky but i also think the glass area may be too small. make it a bit bigger if you have room on the paper so that there's a little more space between him and the edge of the glass.

other than that, beautifully done.

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Seladore  (Reply)

Total Posts: 42

Feb 2, 2007 12:39 am

Thank you )
The colored version is already uploaded to PD - you can find it in my gallery

I quite changed it though - don't know if it's for good or bad... I can see bunch of mistakes already, but I'd like to hear your opinion )

Now that I look at it, you are right about the shoulders... I'm afraid its rather late though.
On the colored version they look even worse I guess, haha

BogusRed  (Reply)

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Feb 2, 2007 8:29 am

Oh I completely missed the colored version lol. Thanks.

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