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Jiden at sheezy totally recovered my file for me and I'm very grateful for it [emoticon] So because they did that I was able to finish it And here's the finished version. The knife gave me tons of problems so hopefully it looks decent enough. This is by far the best I've done for sure so tell me what you think ^_^ The picture I drew it from is in my image folio on my profile page. oh sorry for the big watermark across it [emoticon]

* edit: I fixed the opacity on the watermark.

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Submitted by: Jill V. -S.T.A.R.S.

Posted: Aug 10, 2007 2:31 pm

Completed: Aug 10, 2007

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Galleries: Angst, Finished Work, Original Art, Realism

Keywords: don't make me..., realism

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Eshkenazi

Total Posts: 144

Aug 15, 2007 1:34 pm

[emoticon] I would freak out with a knife that close to my eye. Even if I was the one holding it there (probably especially if I was. People don't trust me with sharp objects; I'm just a wee bit accident prone).

He has lovely eyes. I really hope he's not intending to cut one of them out because that would be a shame. [emoticon]

Great job on the beads of sweat and the little indention the knife is making on his skin.

The knife looks pretty good. It might need some darker reflections across the surface just for impact but I think it looks good the way it is too.

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Jill V. -S.T.A.R.S. (Reply)

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Aug 15, 2007 3:29 pm

Thanks [emoticon] I've been staring at it for a while and I found quite a few things I need to fix. I'll add the reflection thing to the list lol yeah I'd freak too If I had a knife that close to my eye XD

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puddingtreat

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Sep 25, 2007 12:33 pm

This looks amazing and very detailed. Love how you've done his eyes and the sweat, and the coloring looks splendid ^^

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Jill V. -S.T.A.R.S. (Reply)

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Sep 25, 2007 2:39 pm

Thanks very much! [emoticon] I actually think the sweat is what makes the whole pic look as nice as it is lol XD

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Purple Artichoke

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Sep 29, 2007 10:53 am

This looks great! I am in love with the way you did his eyes, and lips. The knife turned out very well too! [emoticon]

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Jill V. -S.T.A.R.S. (Reply)

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Sep 29, 2007 3:07 pm

Thanks very much! The eye is what I'm most proud of in this pic. I'm glad you like it [emoticon]

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scorpioangel

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Nov 29, 2007 7:28 pm

Simply love his eye right there, it seems very alive and with personality. Very nice skintone too [emoticon]

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Jill V. -S.T.A.R.S. (Reply)

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Nov 30, 2007 3:32 pm

Thanks very much! The eye is my favorite part of the whole pic XD Glad you like it ^_^

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Wayne55

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Jun 19, 2008 8:24 pm

I like this one too. The guy looks very to have some mental issues. [emoticon]

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Jill V. -S.T.A.R.S. (Reply)

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Jun 20, 2008 11:28 am

Yeah anyone who holds a knife that close to their eye is bound to ahve something weird going on in there head [emoticon] and thanks for all the comments I appreciate it ^_^

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