Kankuro's Favorite Puppet

I appriciate your honesty. Yeah, I wanted to capture him looking a little lustful....and honestly I had thee most trouble with his body. Im used to now drawing guys that are tall, lank, and thin that i seem to botch any guy that has muscles to define. But thanks...when I first read "this is gonna be harsh" I was like...."I should have set this to a good comment only setting...hahahaha

I have to agree with Puayen on this one. I do like the background, though even as horrible at backgrounds as I am I've always felt making a distorted copy of the original image is on the lazier side. The proportions seem ok for the most part though the male looks a bit off. It also seems he would be incredibly taller than the female, so one of them may be a bit short (unless that's what you intended). The only other thing I would add is that while your sense of light and shadow is just about spot on, I feel the depth of the coloring could be better. Use a more gradual approach rather than the horribly overdone 3 level scheme (highlight, base, shadow). That's only my opinion though, it may just not be your style. Good coloring/shadowing can really make an ok drawing look great though, so it may be something to at least try and get a feel for.

hehe, yeah Achika is much shorter than him. I did intend that to the fullest. My style is I try and stick towards original cell cg style. The painting style, and light colors isn't my thing. I just notice that alot of the art here is done that way. But I apprciate your imput. As far as the background goes...i stumbled upon a hentai picture that used that method and thought it would be good to give it a try with something.