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An RP character of mine. She's a water sprite, and something of a slut. I need to draw her twin (fraternal, so they look different XD) as well.
Her scales were fun to color, and I like how those look (forgot the purple in her ears >.> ) but some things just look a bit off.
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Submitted by: Altaike
Posted: Jan 17, 2008 6:33 am
Completed: Jan 3, 2008
Critiques (7)Galleries: Fantasy, Finished Work, Mythical Creatures, Original Art
Keywords: sprite girl water fantasy, blue overload
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 pazazzTotal Posts: 547Jan 17, 2008 7:01 amWhat an interesting looking character, she must be fun to RP with. I like the soft look of her hair and the scales are well done. Her body needs more definition and shading. The drape of her skirt looks a little strange and you should use some darker values there, as well as, some contrasting shading to make it really pop. The plain background does nothing for this piece, placing a warmer color there may help to balance out all the cooler tones in the subject. Nice work, thanks for sharing. |
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Altaike (Reply)Total Posts: 14Jan 19, 2008 6:41 pmThank you! <3 |
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 blackwingedangelTotal Posts: 224Jan 17, 2008 11:43 amI like how soft her hair looks and also her expression and the clear blue color. but her body needs more shape,its hard to tell if she is a woman or a pretty male, also add some shading/highlights to define muscles and shape.some kind of background would make the pic look more finished. |
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Altaike (Reply)Total Posts: 14Jan 19, 2008 6:46 pmHm... more shape in what way do you think? (I can see what you mean) Since she's not in anything that would constrict her waist I don't want to give her more there, so all I can think of is to define her a bit better up top (I should probably edit that for shading at least anyway). |
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blackwingedangel (Reply)Total Posts: 224Jan 20, 2008 1:27 amwith more shape I meant give her a little more breast,maybe a bit more hips. and more difference in shading/highlights, that also defines the shape of the body. |
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Altaike (Reply)Total Posts: 14Jan 20, 2008 6:25 amAh, that makes sense. I'll definitely change that around when I go back to re-shade then and see if I can't get her looking right. Thanks! ^^ |
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blackwingedangel (Reply)Total Posts: 224Jan 20, 2008 7:50 amyour most welcome,just happy if my advise helped you a bit. |
