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Did this for a promotion on deviant art and this image turned out well so I will post it here.

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Submitted by: GreenMouse

Posted: Jan 31, 2008 7:53 pm

Completed: Dec 9, 2007

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Galleries: General, Original Art, Sketchbook

Keywords: avant calender girl falling, scan5

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Feb 3, 2008 12:21 pm

This has a deco or period look to it and I can see how you wanted to depict movement here. Chopping off her hands and feet give this an unfinished look and is a composition no-no. Her hair looks too stiff and should flow more as her dress does, her torso seems just a little too long. Keep trying, thanks for sharing. [emoticon]

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