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In spite of the deep corrections I must apply to this picture, I still share it ^^ corrections shall be done soon.

EDIT: Corrected version up already ^^ you will find the previous version here

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Submitted by: selene18

Posted: Mar 21, 2008 8:45 am

Completed: unknown

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Galleries: Biseinen, Finished Work, Original Art, Sci-Fi

Keywords: skymaster, yaoi, bishounen, biseinen, strenght, power, seme

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ImaginaryPrincess

Total Posts: 4

Mar 21, 2008 10:25 am

The background and colour is really quite impressive! The proprtioning, though, seems a bit ... off- especially the head position. That, of course, could just be a result of the "Skymaster" bit around his head. Or is it her head? The face seems feminine... but the muscles seem masculine. Perhaps that's something else you could clear up. But- again- props for the awesome colours!!!

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selene18  (Reply)

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Mar 21, 2008 1:04 pm

Actually it's a he. I still don't know a totally breastless "she" with huge muscled chest and arms, hehe.

Right now I'm working on this picture, but it's taking me a lot of pain correcting it -__- maybe the head thing you notice is because of his face which is a bit off, according to my beta. Perhaps you might drop by again to check out the corrected version (which I'll post soon) and let me know...

Thanks for the comment [emoticon]

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ImaginaryPrincess  (Reply)

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Mar 22, 2008 11:46 am

Hehe, I don't know any 'shes' like that either- but you never know with science-fiction/fantasy craziness. [emoticon] I'll be eagerly awaiting the corrected version!

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selene18  (Reply)

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Mar 23, 2008 8:25 pm

Oh, I almost forgot, hehe... the corrected version is up already. I've just included a picture of the previous version in the artist' comment thingie [emoticon]

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