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A pretty picture of Yanagi, from a manga a friend and I are working on called "Angely i Demony," which is Russian for "Angels and Demons." I love the color in this, but royally messed up her legs and bra. She's supposed to have a ring on the index finger of her left hand, but I couldn't manage to make it look right. Reference used; found on Google.

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Submitted by: SaikonoYume

Posted: Oct 1, 2005 1:40 pm

Completed: Jul 12, 2005

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Galleries: Finished Work, General, Original Art

Keywords: yanagi, yanagi moritonde, angels and demons, angeli y demoni, angel, sleep, have sweet and gentle dreams

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Total Posts: 13

Oct 1, 2005 12:57 pm

this is simply amazing
she looks really beautiful

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SaikonoYume  (Reply)

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Oct 2, 2005 11:31 am

Thank you very much!! I'm glad you liked it.

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Sora kara ochitekuru no wa are wa ame de wa nakute

That which fell from the sky was not rain

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Cindora

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Oct 13, 2005 3:09 pm

wow i like this picture i like how she lie there

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SaikonoYume  (Reply)

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Oct 13, 2005 4:24 pm

Thank you very much!

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Sora kara ochitekuru no wa are wa ame de wa nakute

That which fell from the sky was not rain

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PookyWooky

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May 13, 2006 12:33 pm

Okay, honestly, I think she looks perfect and her bra looks nice. Jewelery is an obbsession of mine too, but I think she looks fine without any rings and things. [emoticon] Her legs are a bit small, but hey, the rest looks awesome so you have an excuse. [emoticon]

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SaikonoYume  (Reply)

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May 13, 2006 2:35 pm

Yeah, the legs are messed up. I keep meaning to fix them. Maybe one day, lol.

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Sora kara ochitekuru no wa are wa ame de wa nakute

That which fell from the sky was not rain

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Angel

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May 14, 2006 9:07 pm

This is really awesome, very strong! My only critique would be to maybe thicken her top leg? It just seems kind of off to me

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SaikonoYume  (Reply)

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May 15, 2006 5:52 am

It is, and everyone so far has said that!

I really, really ought to fix it.

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Sora kara ochitekuru no wa are wa ame de wa nakute

That which fell from the sky was not rain

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Keenarnor

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Jul 29, 2006 5:58 pm

Wow! This is so beautiful! I love the way she is laying and the colors! [emoticon]

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