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A work-in-progress, done with 0.5 HB pencil

There's no shading yet, as i will do it once it's finished. And yes, there's alot, what i should fix about it.

References used: Ragnarök manga / manwha

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Submitted by: Brethesen

Posted: Feb 1, 2006 8:46 am

Completed: unknown

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Galleries: General, Original Art, Realism, Work In Progress

Keywords: unfinished, sketches, undesided

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Lady Anime79

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Feb 1, 2006 10:08 am

Aww, so you aren't listening to my advice then? [emoticon] Okay, well perhaps you can get some better results from others on here then. But I will honestly say that I am proud of you for taking up art now. And the more you draw, the more your skills will develop, blah blah blah. I won't give too much of a ciritque here since I already told you what I thought should be fixed. Anyway, good luck hun. I don't know when I will be on next, but I hope I will get to see this finished soon. All my love to you.

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Brethesen  (Reply)

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Feb 1, 2006 10:37 am

What are you meaning, dear? Yes, i'm gonna listen to your advice and change it as you have instructed. It's still a work in progress >.<

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Lady Anime79  (Reply)

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Feb 1, 2006 10:52 am

Really? [emoticon] Okay honey. But change it how YOU want. And not how I want you too. This is your beautiful art my love. And I am so anxious to see it all finished. [emoticon] And I was only joking before with what I said. I am glad that you are seeking out as much advice as you can. There are so many wonderful artists here whom I would be lost without. Minimaid for one. She has always guided me and helped me improve. Oh.. and Dennis is another one. Oh and Bogus Red, and Karana Kaou, and Arkillian. Arkillian is so awesome. So I hope she will give you some advice too. Anyway, I am so proud of you Joni. I love being able to share art with you now. [emoticon] Well, mine and now yours. Something like that. [emoticon] I look forward to watching your skills grow as you draw. [emoticon] All of my love to you. [emoticon]

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themusicdied

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Feb 2, 2006 8:14 pm

Personally, I think it looks pretty good. The only thing I think could use a little more detail is the hair. You could try sweeping some little pieces of that out further. [emoticon]

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