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Well, I think I'm gonna pencil the pic- I'm liking it so far ^^ Small update cause I'm gonna be busy this weekend ^^;
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Submitted by: arkillian
Posted: Feb 9, 2006 8:55 pm
Completed: unknown
Critiques (13)Galleries: Fantasy, Original Art, Romance, Work In Progress
Keywords: alex, athena, dragon twins, in the air- partial
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 Elite Saiyajin JennyTotal Posts: 266Feb 10, 2006 11:19 amThe shading is absolutely beautiful, man! But around the shoulders of the man, maybe you should soften those a bit, it looks a little scratchy around that area. And maybe you should distinguish the woman's nose a bit, it's a hard to tell where it ends and where it meets the forehead. But other than that, great job! It's absolutely beautiful! XD --- Si vis pacem parabellum - If you want peace, prepare for war. |
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 arkillian (Reply)Total Posts: 3139Feb 10, 2006 10:20 pmAlot of the detail has dissappeared through the scanning process, but I'll keep it in mind --- |
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Show your Paper Demon love! Hug a submission and tell it why you love it so much ^^ |
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Elite Saiyajin Jenny (Reply)Total Posts: 266Feb 12, 2006 8:51 pmThat happens to me a lot, too, so I sympathize. ^^ --- Si vis pacem parabellum - If you want peace, prepare for war. |
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 majinbulgetaTotal Posts: 1237Feb 10, 2006 6:03 pmHow pretty! --- * You dont have to LIKE my work just learn to RESPECT it * ~MB THE GREAT AND POWERFUL |
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I love the mans hair!|
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arkillian (Reply)Total Posts: 3139Feb 10, 2006 10:18 pmThanks ^^ That is unfortunatly the easiest part.... --- |
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 grey wingsTotal Posts: 234Feb 11, 2006 9:19 amhehe, her thumb is a little long don't you think?? hehe...oh so's his --- brunette: awe blonde: *looks up* i don't see it...
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haha, ok that's all i can pick on, *throws the stick away* this is really good..no awesome. i don't want to just point out what i like on this cause i'd just be pointing ot the whole picture,hehe. great job, i really like it. ![[emoticon]](http://www.paperdemon.com/images/forum/mysmilies/15pxyellow_grin.gif)
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arkillian (Reply)Total Posts: 3139Feb 11, 2006 10:42 amNo- Actually, no you say it, it's too short. It looks long cause it's not webbed ^^; YOINK! It's a good thing I'm posting WIP to find this stuff out!! That's another thing I noticed int he drawing process and totally dismissed! ^^; Thanks for the compliment though- The whole pic is going to hopefully be really nice when its done --- |
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grey wings (Reply)Total Posts: 234Feb 11, 2006 3:55 pmoooh, lol, kewlies, can't wait to see the finished vertion --- brunette: awe blonde: *looks up* i don't see it...
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arkillian (Reply)Total Posts: 3139Feb 12, 2006 8:43 pmDon't be- it's just practise. I'm still not that great at it, but the more I do it, the beter it is ^^ --- |
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 thedemonsessTotal Posts: 530Feb 16, 2006 12:37 pmThis is absolutely gorgeous. The only I see wrong in this picture is the woman's thumb. It is looks a little too skinny and long. Other than that, this picture is just wonderful. I am amazed with the shading. --- |
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arkillian (Reply)Total Posts: 3139Feb 17, 2006 2:28 pmThis is fixed in the finished pencils- its cause she doesn't have any webbing between her thumb and hand. --- |
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 BogusRedTotal Posts: 2895Feb 16, 2006 1:04 pmI think this is looking pretty darn sweet. The girl's cheekbone shadow seems too dark though. Just a small thing to consider changing. THeir expressions and their poses are great. I especially like how you have the girl's hand holding the wine glass. --- Help me squarsh bugs |
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