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Didn't have anything beter to do, so I slapped this together as a maybe for the cover of the comic- Equity if I do it. Comment how you will- I'm more interested if the layout is good than anything ![[emoticon]](http://www.paperdemon.com/images/forum/mysmilies/15pxyellow_smile.gif)
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Submitted by: arkillian
Posted: May 9, 2006 9:44 pm
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 CokekittyTotal Posts: 2616May 10, 2006 7:33 amLooks spiffy. --- |
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 arkillian (Reply)Total Posts: 3139May 10, 2006 2:04 pmThanks --- |
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 WildeKardeTotal Posts: 188May 10, 2006 7:08 pmNice concept. But you might try to put the sword on a side view, or draw the sword at a farther view so you can bring the faces a little closer together. --- Procrastinate Later! words to live by. |
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arkillian (Reply)Total Posts: 3139May 10, 2006 8:20 pmThe sword can't be side on- and the sword is more important than the men. Mabe seperate them more insteed? The sword is Equity btw... --- |
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WildeKarde (Reply)Total Posts: 188May 10, 2006 8:25 pmMaybe you can draw back the sword and show more of it. Maybe at least half the sword. --- Procrastinate Later! words to live by. |
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arkillian (Reply)Total Posts: 3139May 10, 2006 8:37 pmThe problem is then it wouldn't be dominating, and this is the most reckonisable area of the sword. --- |
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WildeKarde (Reply)Total Posts: 188May 10, 2006 11:07 pmHmmm, I say that because It spilts them in the middle but as one face it looks too spread apart, But the concept is great. --- Procrastinate Later! words to live by. |
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arkillian (Reply)Total Posts: 3139May 11, 2006 3:42 amHmmmm- needs refining. I still like my first cocept of just the sword with power swirling around it.... --- |
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WildeKarde (Reply)Total Posts: 188May 11, 2006 9:04 amWell, I can't wait to see the first issue. --- Procrastinate Later! words to live by. |
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arkillian (Reply)Total Posts: 3139May 11, 2006 1:59 pmMe either, but it takes second to Salyer's Game, which luckily I DO have seperate writers and a colourist for ^^ All I need to do is pencils and inks. And the biarchy resizing crap *groans* Hate that part... --- |
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WildeKarde (Reply)Total Posts: 188May 11, 2006 5:48 pmMaybe you should get a Tracer. I mean Inker. --- Procrastinate Later! words to live by. |
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arkillian (Reply)Total Posts: 3139May 11, 2006 6:05 pmThat sounded bitter- inking is actully really hard to do you know... --- |
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WildeKarde (Reply)Total Posts: 188May 11, 2006 6:10 pmOh no I wasn'r trying to sound bitter. Most comic book artist have inkers since drawing takes so much of their time. And some of the best inkers are damn good artist as well. Like Thibert. I't would save you some time and pressure to get an inker. --- Procrastinate Later! words to live by. |
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arkillian (Reply)Total Posts: 3139May 11, 2006 6:51 pmOk- I don't get the referance, but these comics- I haven't gotten anything back from them except kudos. We don't have the money for an inker let alone a colourist for my other comic if I do it. It's out of love at the moment.... --- |
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WildeKarde (Reply)Total Posts: 188May 11, 2006 6:57 pmYou might find a volunteer. Someone that looking for practice and the experience. Go watch "Chasing Amy" right now! LOL its worth it. Jay and Bob are in it. --- Procrastinate Later! words to live by. |
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arkillian (Reply)Total Posts: 3139May 11, 2006 7:35 pmWhere do I find it? ^^; --- |
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WildeKarde (Reply)Total Posts: 188May 11, 2006 7:45 pmGo movie rental store. --- Procrastinate Later! words to live by. |
