Zarbon and Bulma WIP

The right leg is too short- that's the problem. Either that, or he is totally off balance. There's a bit of a size difference with Bulma and Zarb. Is this right?

Um... His right elbow could be wider too. It seems a little small for a warrior of the DBZverse... Errr... If this is all crap, then I'm stilly drunk atthe moment ^^;

It is true that Zarbon seems to be much taller compared to Bulma, but I suppose that the difference in size is due to the difference of age and to the fact that Zarbon is an alien.

The left leg of Zarbon is slightly deviated but I do not see defects in the way he holds Bulma in his arms and their faces are well drawn.

In conclusion, I would say that the only defect would be his left leg, besides that, the draft is realistic and well done.

OK this is what I see. WHy it looks wrong. He is leaning to one side,which seems to be because of her weight. But her legs should not be the heavier side of her. With his arm positioned how it is, it seens she is slipping down. She should come up a little more on his arm. Or move his arm more under her.Also, he looks in motion in his uper body and his legs look stiff, Perhaps a slight bend to his knees would make him look like he is braceing her wait. Then again I'm sick and its 4:35 am.

ok...I am really liking how you want this to look. Yes you want some comments and critiques...alright..yes...the lover body seems a little off from the upper body...I am liking the upper body from how I am looking at it now...it is just you do kinda have him on a slant and he looks like he is tipping or something...ok maybe he is a little drunk?! lol no. I am loving the way Bulma is resting in his arms I am loving that...As Arkillian said he needs a little re shaping or the legs as in height and ...he needs to be straight other than those details it is looking awesome I can't wait to see more@

Im not good at pointing out whats wrong, except if it jump at my eyes, is his head a bit too big? Me, i think all drawings are ok and that there is no such thing as something wrong with a drawing. But also, i'm sure you already had all the help you needed so i'm just going to rant and rave.
I love it. God, ever since i've read this fanfic and that i know your working on it...i've been dying to see more and more of your project. I wish i could help you with it. Cant wait to see the finish work. Love it Susie!!!!

Gorgeous, I love Zarbon's expression. And this has to be the first ZarbonxBulma fanart I've ever seen! I'm really not much of an artist myself, so I'm afraid I can't help you. But really, it looks perfect to me! ^_^

I think his arm should be a bit more under her back then nare her neck apart fomr then it's cool