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ShonenAi_Kiss_By_The_Water_by_BishonenMistress

-ShonenAi- Kiss By The Water

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Characters: Original - Opal (jewelry wearing one) and Ku (silver haired)

Medium: Sketched with a Wacom tablet on Photoshop, then colored by the same means.

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Main point of this exercise? To work on realisticness... I am pretty happy with the characters... but the background is just...
... Pretend it looks pretty [emoticon] yeah!
... any tips on background would be appreciated...


... o_o; I just realized I referenced the architecture... but not the background... next time I shall have to be more awake and attempt to do that with the nature in the background as well [emoticon]

so maybe, when I am not tired after fiddling with it for hours already, I'll go back and remake part of the background and make it look better...

okay I stop rambling now...

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Submitted by: BishonenMistress

Posted: Jun 20, 2006 3:51 pm

Completed: Jun 20, 2006

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Galleries: Finished Work, Original Art, Romance, Shounen-Ai

Keywords: original characters, yaoi, shounen ai, shonen ai, kiss, kissing, men, pretty men, man, pretty man, long hair, opal and ku, opal jewelry, silver hair, shut eyes, closed eyes, pointed ears, pointy ears, pagoda, lake, water, trees, wolf demon, homosexual, lips, -shonenai- kiss by the water

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arkillian

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Jun 20, 2006 5:22 pm

Plants have a heirachy- like animals- differnt layers and stuff- they're competitive for light. There's the grass floor where there's moss, grass etc... Depending on the light levels is whet survives, then there's shrubs- waist height plants, flaxes etc... then the trees that scale above everything. A dense forest also can have vines hanging off trees. Depending on how issolated the forest is is how many vines and how thick. If you give it some low line shrub, and black out anything past 3 or 4 trees- if it's dense, not much light will come through anyways. Also, if it's not kept, trees will have branches to half way down the trunck and the branches usually triangle off in some way- unless pruned, when they would ball up. The water- if it's large, then make the furtherest part of the water would be darker, and it would have a shine across it- broken up if the water is choppy. Past that, I suggest photo referances- I don't do landscapes well, and flora is NOT my thing ^^; (despite NZ being 60% forest or whatever XD )

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BishonenMistress  (Reply)

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Jun 21, 2006 10:35 am

yes... I think I shall refer to a photo next time. Landscapes aren't my thing either [emoticon] but I do like having decent backgrounds... so I will learn for that reason

thanks for the tips [emoticon]

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... think their lips are numb yet? *points up at avatar*

arkillian  (Reply)

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Jun 21, 2006 3:26 pm

NP. Shrubs are you friend

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Botan

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Jun 20, 2006 6:14 pm

thats awesome, i [emoticon] it! yay, new [emoticon] !

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BishonenMistress  (Reply)

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Jun 21, 2006 10:37 am

thank you! and thank you for the favorite!

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... think their lips are numb yet? *points up at avatar*

AmericanReject

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Jun 21, 2006 6:19 am

Very cool! I like it alot. [emoticon]

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BishonenMistress  (Reply)

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Jun 21, 2006 10:39 am

thank you! and thank you for the fav!

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... think their lips are numb yet? *points up at avatar*

Morality_Of Sin

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Jun 21, 2006 3:38 pm

*drools* *Stops to go get a bucket* *continues drooling.*

You know what the best part is? Because you aimed for more of a realistic look..it is just that more believeable.

Excellent job! [emoticon]

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BishonenMistress  (Reply)

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Jun 22, 2006 7:23 pm

*giggles* thank you! and thank you kindly for faving [emoticon] !!

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... think their lips are numb yet? *points up at avatar*

thedemonsess

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Jun 21, 2006 5:30 pm

This is beautiful, hun. The two are quite realistic. Very nicely done. I'm not very good in terms of backgrounds like this, but I think you pulled it off nicely.

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BishonenMistress  (Reply)

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Jun 22, 2006 7:23 pm

thank you very much! [emoticon]

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... think their lips are numb yet? *points up at avatar*

thedemonsess  (Reply)

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Jun 24, 2006 7:16 pm

You're welcome. [emoticon]

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Love can be blind.