Critiques for "Make This Last Forever"

Hey- it's alot better than you poke a stick at it for. IT has issues sure, but the poses is what makes a yaoi/yuri- not as much the detail. I think you did well. Its very cosy looking :blush:

Alright- let me explain it. Since Bryan gets torn out of time and has no past, I don't consider him anymore related to Alex than by blood, thus, this is about the only non creepy coupling for yaoi to me O.o Any other coupling is either incest, or freaky.

Attaching a red pen crit- You need to watch their backs. The red line I did is trying to follow your art style, giving them the shape, but not so much the broadness I give them. Watch your shoulders too- as far back as they can extend, they can't go past the shoulder blade even when pinned back. The thumb on Alex's hand was a little stubby- needs a little fleashy area Profiles though- the easiest way is to draw a line and use that to draw off. The eyes are about 1/2 way down, the nose is 2/5 of that. The mouth is the next 5th, and the last two 5ths are bottom lip and chin. The ear is as long as the nose is.

Well... I roasted it I guess ^^; LOL! Hope it helps

Omgs.


Thank you darling. I will redraw it over, or at least try to fix it.

Thank you for helping me out on my art and stuff. I appreciate it a lot.

And I tried to make it look like they were cosy and stuff and not all... well, you know. <.<

*hugs*

Always there to help

And the attached file I forgot to attach >.> *slaps face*