Critiques for "Schrodinger Salute: sketch"

I did what I think would make it look better. Im not sure if itll help at all, but I hope it does XD
The problem was in the torso, it was twisted oddly for the position of the legs, I believe. And the right shoulder needed some sort of indentation b/c the neck and shoulder dont immediately connect.(You can ignore the left shoulder, if youd like, it was just a guide line for me XD)
I think this is looking good! Im looking forward to see it colored! ^_^

Yeah, that seems to make sense. Thanks for the advice!
8D
-scurries off to make changes-

XD No problem ^_^