Critiques for "Expressive Dragon KaGe"

This picture brings me back to a story, that is evolving in my head. Main character is a Biogenetically altered human (think of a human torso and head implanted to a alien (i mean alien from Alien movies...) body) and cryofreezed to wait for a surgical operation, where computer chip is installed into his hypotalamus, thus gaining control of a perfect assasin and a field soldier. But then they (somebody, who maded him up) suddently disappeard, leaving him cryofreezed for millenias, until cryofreeze's monitor blinks a text "Malfunction". And our hero wokes up and blaah blaah blaah, and he finds himself outside, lookin towards forest from atop a mountain hill... dunno what it's gonna be, duunno if i will ever write it down...

Write it down! It sounds like a good story!

I'll... Try... I usually write my poems in certain mood... and this will be my first LOOOONNNG story...