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bloodysmurf

Total Posts: 184

Jun 10, 2007 10:10 am

Gah, so sexy. >.> Those abs would make anyone wanna do laundry ^_^" I think from the sketched in facial features, that a blankish/stoic expression would work..that or a small smile or something. But yeahhhh, sexy sexy man..demon..guy thing. Love the ears too!

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Sliverbane  (Reply)

Total Posts: 280

Jun 10, 2007 10:57 am

Yes...a stoic expression would be nice. Nehra is always grinning at something, but this would be a good peek at his serious side.

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kaitou-kage

Total Posts: 35

Apr 23, 2008 9:18 pm

This one intrigues me the most of your gallery so far. I really like the angle and thoughtful mood of the pose, though I do not quite understand the blindfold. Or maybe his eyes just aren't on there yet?

The curve of the action line is very sleek and sexy, and fits with what I'm getting is meant to be a sensual character. The anatomy seems pretty good, as well.

For a background, maybe a sort of arch leading into a vague chamber? Nothing detailed beyond the arch. Just showing that there's a portal into *somewhere* behind him should be plenty.

Sliverbane  (Reply)

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Apr 24, 2008 9:41 am

Oh! Heh....I haven't figured out an expression so my sketch lines are still there. It does kinda look like a blind fold. That's a great idea for the background. And yes...very sensual character. I'm delighted you picked that up.

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kaitou-kage  (Reply)

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Apr 24, 2008 10:43 am

I think you're onto something there with the shape of the mouth! If you make a sort of distant expression, like he's staring off at something behind and to the side of the viewer, it'll be perfect! Basically, looking straight in the direction the face is pointed. Does that make sense? @_@


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