Critiques for "Reason Is But An Illusion"

*waves hand* I can help ^^

Right- So I'm gonna give you a roast, so hold onto your chair- butit's ok, cause I like my meat medium, not well done

My first thing- if you're useing a photo manipulating program, opt out the grey areas by using levels or threshold. That'll make it black and white (without invisible arms becoming visible mysteriously)- easy quality control

Now the line art it'self. I've attached a visual critique of how I believe their head should be layed out. The girl's forehead appears very high and flat because her eeline is a little high- should be about half way up her face. that'l lower her hair line and make it less drastic with the fringe. The top of her head is a little flat too- if you look at the lines I put on yours, it vaguely follows he shape of the head (a head isn't a circle, but it' close enough)

For most of it, Sasuke is done well. Just the way you've cut his jaw line makes him look like he has a weak chin. If the angle is steeper, then it give him his Bishounen jaw line which is smooth rather than a ridgid square one

Points I like- she REALLY has a freaked out expression (personally, I'd love it if Sasu threw himself at me but hey :giggle which really suits the 'using' situation. Even though you can't see Sasu's face, he still looks very cool and collected :3

So yeah- hope it helps! Kising ain't the easiest scene to draw XD I normally fight them for days before finding a referance on google XD I sux0r at the Xor XD LOLS!

Thanx. This is DEFINATELY a big help.

That makes it all worth it then if I helped that much ^^