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Jill V. -S.T.A.R.S.

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Jun 23, 2007 10:37 pm

This looks really beautiful ^^ The mountains look very realistic. [emoticon]

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Yuuki

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Jun 25, 2007 10:07 am

The colors look great and yellow and purple harmonize very well here. I like the mood of the landscape.

Sliverbane  (Reply)

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Jun 25, 2007 7:49 pm

Thanks. ^_^

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arkillian

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Jun 25, 2007 2:39 pm

The only possible critique I could have it that the flow of this picture feels a little ridgid. It's a little difficult to explain- I'm not too good with scenery, but that's how it feels. Other than that, it's a pretty picture.

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Sliverbane  (Reply)

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Jun 25, 2007 7:49 pm

Maybe it's the large amount of stone depicted. Thanks for the crit.

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arkillian  (Reply)

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Jun 25, 2007 9:31 pm

Could be. IT's dominating, and I think the flow would work out more if it were zoomed out a bit ^^

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Sliverbane  (Reply)

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Jun 26, 2007 7:40 am

That's what I thought when I finished this painting. About the rocks dominating the image. The reference photograph was the same. Bright blue sky and a big brown and red rock. When I turned this in my instructor liked it - I was surprised.

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arkillian  (Reply)

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Jun 26, 2007 1:17 pm

I'm not surprised, but some referance pictures aren't good to start off with. But in saying this, the mountain area is the subject and you can argue that it takes up enough room for that. Donno.

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BogusRed

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Jun 27, 2007 7:24 pm

I think the color came out nicely [emoticon]

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Sliverbane  (Reply)

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Jun 28, 2007 10:22 am

Thanks Susie!

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Purple Artichoke

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Aug 30, 2007 11:33 am

I love this piece! You chose great colours, and you used them so well.
I particularly love the shadows [emoticon]

Sliverbane  (Reply)

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Aug 31, 2007 7:48 am

Thank you very much! I've really been surprised by the wonderful comments I've received on this piece.

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Purple Artichoke  (Reply)

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Aug 31, 2007 11:21 am

You shouldn't be so surprised! It's a great piece [emoticon]


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