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Jill V. -S.T.A.R.S.

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Jul 12, 2007 2:35 pm

Wow this is very pretty. I love how soft it looks. Awesome color too great job [emoticon]

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Friendship is like peeing on yourself: everyone can see it, but only you get the warm feeling that it brings.

Inqy  (Reply)

Total Posts: 231

Jul 12, 2007 3:00 pm

Thanks! I'm glad you like it. [emoticon]

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Love is the extremely difficult realization that something other than oneself is real. (Iris Murdoch)

Jill V. -S.T.A.R.S.  (Reply)

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Jul 12, 2007 3:07 pm

No problem [emoticon]

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Friendship is like peeing on yourself: everyone can see it, but only you get the warm feeling that it brings.

arkillian

Total Posts: 3139

Jul 12, 2007 4:58 pm

If I may give some constuctive crit on this (Ignore it if you wish), although the colours are very beautiful, the picture has no draw power in it. What I mean by this is we can't relate to the picture in any way. The fairy doesn't look at us, she's not showing a feeling, her pose is closed of,and even though the picture feels magical, its still not obvious what is going on. Alot of time, posey pics are ok, but only if they're looking somewhere. It's something to look out for.

This would be a beutiful picture if the arms hugged around her slightly, and the fairy looking up, or with her hair pinned back with a apathetic expression. I'd like to see atleast one leg stretched out cause she looks uncomfortable. You're gonna say that it's only a doodle probably, and that's fine. These are my thoughts

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Inqy  (Reply)

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Jul 12, 2007 5:36 pm

Nope, you're right. [emoticon] It's not a doodle, it's a finished piece, and even though it would be lovely with all those things, as I said, she wanted the title to be 'Alone.' I don't think she wanted to be drawn at all.

I have a weird relationship with the things I draw, if they want it a certain way, it becomes that way, regardless of what I think.

But thank you for the criticism, if I re-do this picture at any time I will take it into consideration.

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Love is the extremely difficult realization that something other than oneself is real. (Iris Murdoch)

arkillian  (Reply)

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Jul 12, 2007 9:14 pm

As I said, taking my crit is up to you. The comment about doodles is that I've commented before on a non roast pic and I got yelled at cause it was a doodle XD A FINAL pic lookiing doodle ^^; Lol. It's up to you anyways- there's ways of drawing alone with making the viewer feel sorry for her or seeing isolation. That's all ^^

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Cokekitty

Total Posts: 2616

Jul 15, 2007 3:55 pm

I can see lonliness. But I can also see expectation, as if she's waiting for something. It's amazing the kind of emotions a picture can convey, even if nothing's really happening. [emoticon] I find pictures like these really nice. Nothing's happening on the surface, but deep below a lot of things are going on, and it's all a matter of what the person who's looking at it can dig up.

[emoticon] Whoo, had a moment there. I really do like this picture, though.

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[emoticon] . . . . Formally the Dollmaker. . . . . . . [emoticon]

Inqy  (Reply)

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Jul 15, 2007 6:51 pm

That's the way I feel about this picture. Even if it seems rather inert, I did spend a lot of time on it, and for me it holds a lot of anticipation. I'm not sure of what, but that's definitely one of the emotions I was feeling when I worked the details.

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Love is the extremely difficult realization that something other than oneself is real. (Iris Murdoch)

Cokekitty  (Reply)

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Jul 15, 2007 9:45 pm

Well, that's good. [emoticon] It's definitely giving off that emotion to me.

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[emoticon] . . . . Formally the Dollmaker. . . . . . . [emoticon]

Lilimayhem

Total Posts: 1424

Jul 25, 2007 3:22 pm

this is very beautiful. Being a fairy myself, Im completely bedazzled by this.

Gorgeous!

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Dont take life too seriously, you're gonna die anyway... [emoticon]

Inqy  (Reply)

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Jul 25, 2007 5:19 pm

Thank you! [emoticon]

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Love is the extremely difficult realization that something other than oneself is real. (Iris Murdoch)

Saimain

Total Posts: 127

Aug 12, 2007 4:53 am

Aww, this is gorgeous! I love the softness of the painting and the colors you chose. Very beautiful and delicate. ^__^

Inqy  (Reply)

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Aug 12, 2007 4:12 pm

Thank you! ^____^

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Love is the extremely difficult realization that something other than oneself is real. (Iris Murdoch)

Ashkevron

Total Posts: 46

Sep 6, 2007 5:07 pm

I love this piece alot!!! The colors used r very dreamy n delicate. So beautiful n gentle. N the title suits it, since there's no one inside except her. N I love her pose too. Btw, I love pics where we can't see the char's face. lol. Leaves alot of room fo imagination. I'm so eaten up with curiosity to see how she'll look like. XD

Inqy  (Reply)

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Sep 10, 2007 8:17 am

Haha, I like those sorts of pictures too. ^^; Thanks!

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Love is the extremely difficult realization that something other than oneself is real. (Iris Murdoch)

Astrozerk04

Total Posts: 45

Sep 14, 2007 2:29 pm

So beautifully done

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Warning: I will bite [emoticon]

Can be found: astrozerk04.deviantart.com/

Inqy  (Reply)

Total Posts: 231

Sep 19, 2007 7:12 pm

Thank you! ^_^

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Love is the extremely difficult realization that something other than oneself is real. (Iris Murdoch)


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