Critiques for "Parted Too Long"

I don't know about anatomical errors, but I love the clothing on this one. Usually when I see people with a lot of detailed lines in their clothing, it's often to hide that their form isn't that great... but you have the form and then the realistic lines to show the drapery. ^^

As for DA deleting... maybe his hand on her back made them nervous, and they thought they had to call child services... You know, "There's a demon molesting a teenage girl!" -.- *grumbles at DA*

Right, because dog demons are real in the first place. Just as real as her being 15 >>; and as real as a bunch of people riding on a flying fire cat.

I loved this!
I can totally add it to my favorites again.
You do a wonderful job, and I look forward to seeing your art here.

Anatomy's not too bad. Feet need a little work, but they along with faces and hands are generally the most difficult body parts to master. Still, you have a good grasp on the look.

Keep up the good work!

Kagome's got some real love triangle going on there, eh?

I always thought she looked like a cheater ;D

ROFL

I won't bother pointing to the proof of it, but dA actually has no legal precedent for what they're doing. It's all because they just don't like manga art. Damn shame.

Great picture, by the way. I'm not a huge Kagome/Sesshomaru shipper, but I still love this picture. Great work.

yeah I know, but I'm not gonna stay there and get repeatedly harassed over it. Besides this place gave me a free premium account for advertising on my DA page for them XD

Oh, I've always loved this picture!! Its so cute, and I'm a big Sesshoumaru and Kagome fan. Very well done. I've always been jealous of how you do clothing and guys' chests

it!!

Hmm, think they deleted it because Sess is showing his boob?? LMAO I don't know, all I know is that I'm glad it's here and I can fav it! Yay!!!

Awesome, love it all over again. ^_^

This has always been one of my favorite drawings. The way you drew their clothing is so inspiring. I love the way you draw Sesshoumaru. I wish I could draw like you.

I could have swore I favored this, O.o Anyway, I love their clothes and hair - I don't exactly know why but I know they draw the most attention for me. I especially like how their legs are entwined. The red is a nice touch with the linework.

Ooh... Line build up and quality. An interesting approach on an anime-style picture. I like it!


You know why they deleted it? Ten to one it's because of the positioning of their groins. If Kagome arched down a bit, they COULD be having sex. Which makes no sense whatsoever regardless, because dA doesn't delete those pictures either.