Critiques for "Kiss"

My God, Kira-sama your art has gotten so beautiful since I last saw you e_e

Just a tiny critique though, Rin's lips look a bit smudgy, but that might be due to the kiss and all xD

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Thanks, Kin-chan!

It's possible they're smudgy...XD That was a hard one to draw & color.

I have to go see what you've been up to lately!!

Oh...

I MISSED YOUR AAAAAART! *breaks down weeping*

Okay, so sorry this will be such a short comment — I really have no time but...

Ah, love! They look so beautiful and glowy, you really have improved! The hair, as always, is great, but now it has that wonderful silky look to it.

I'll send you a message soon as I have the time. (Just registered... still figuring this site out... ^^; )

Cheerio!

Thanks!! I've missed you too!! I've just PMed you!! Welcome!! This is going to be great!! I'm sooo glad you're here!! Is At-chan joining too? And are you going to post TIW here? I hope so!! *glomps you*

Imma gonna read the PM just now!

And I'll definitely be posting TIW here — either me or AT-chan... I'm not sure if he's getting an account. But yeah, it'll be here — just as soon as I get the time to post it.

Soooooo sorry about not emailing you! We've got a bunch of chapters up now... but you'll be able to read it here from now on so that's good! I'm excited to try out their comic posting format — it looks cool!

YAY!

Awesomeness!! I was checking out the comic section today. I like how it looks too! I ahve a doujinshi for urd-chan I'll probably post here as well as another one i need to finish. I hope he comes over here too! Tell him I said hi & glomp him for me! *giggles*
I'm looking forwward to it!!It was getting really good there!! And waht's nice is it's such an engaging story, that I'm looking forward to starting all over again!!

Will do! We're working hard away at chapter 27 as I type!

YAY!!! *doing the happy dance of joy*

I like the soft, dreamy feel to everything. Especially their hair--I also like the way Sesshomaru is cluching her shoulder.

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!