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Mur4s4me

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Aug 13, 2007 8:01 pm

AAH I remember this one xD!! Wow... You really improved with inking, especially his hair O_O! The layers are very clear, and the way you did some lines darker than others help us in "not getting lost between the lines". The same thing could be said for the overall inking.

As for the coloring, maybe darker shade would work well as well as adding more highlights on some spots, but other than that, it still looks great!

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