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Aug 25, 2007 8:34 pm

I really like this specially how you have all their names as the matrix coding *feels all inspired to waatch Matrix again ^^ *

Having a hue of green over it would be an improvement to it. Attached a visual crit of the pic with a green hue and some areas hit with the dodge tool for highlights- A big imporvement on an already cool pic ^^ Um- I did a 1 minute blah job on it- I'd assume you'd make a better, more thorough job than me ^^

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Agent Elrond  (Reply)

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Aug 25, 2007 8:39 pm

Thank you! Always good to see another Matrix fan!

And that's a really cool idea about having the green hue: when I made this, I had in mind it being black and white, to reflect the stark black and white comic style they used for the storyboards of the film.

But I like what you did with the green hue: if I ever have the opportunity to go back and tweak this image I'll try that and let you know!

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arkillian  (Reply)

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Aug 25, 2007 9:40 pm

No problem ^^ I thought I might tell you as a different way of looking at it. Black and white is good, but sometimes it can be a little too harsh. Having the green median maakes a big difference though- doesn't it [emoticon] It's also partly a fangirl thing XD

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Inqy

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Aug 25, 2007 9:26 pm

I definitely like Morpheus the best, but it's all very well done. [emoticon]

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Agent Elrond  (Reply)

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Aug 26, 2007 5:32 pm

All HAIL Mr. Fishburn! *hails*

Mr. Weaving is cool too. It's no coincidence Agent Smith get's the biggest headshot!

^^

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kotsu

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Jan 25, 2008 7:03 am

very awesome comic like style and this is a great movie ^^ fav!!


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