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natasha

Total Posts: 69

Sep 5, 2007 5:22 am

Its a cute scene, I dont know the characters but i still like it!

kirayasha

Total Posts: 725

Sep 5, 2007 6:13 am

*laughs* This looks like a fun one!

puayen

Total Posts: 182

Sep 5, 2007 7:21 am

I think it works out too, in a humorous way.

Art-wise: I think adding more complicacies to the folds of the clothing would enhance the overall quality of the picture from just a comical panel to something more.

irish  (Reply)

Total Posts: 41

Sep 5, 2007 9:29 am

Thanks! And yeah, I did this super fast for the contest, but you're right about the folds [emoticon]

puayen  (Reply)

Total Posts: 182

Sep 5, 2007 6:31 pm

You are welcomed. You have a very interesting/distinct style in your art that would suit very well for humor...

nomonkey

Total Posts: 43

Sep 5, 2007 2:46 pm

you know you got kagome's uniform wronge. now since she is a he it would be black with no necker tie and it would be a callor that went up the neck.

irish  (Reply)

Total Posts: 41

Sep 5, 2007 4:24 pm

I realize that. I did it that way on purpose because if I gave "her" a black uniform she'd look exactly like Hojo and people would be confused.

nomonkey  (Reply)

Total Posts: 43

Sep 6, 2007 6:20 pm

yeah i see your point. people would get confused easily. i know....i think i'll draw a crossdress one too of inuyasha. i don't knoew if i'll ever get done but yeah.

irish  (Reply)

Total Posts: 41

Sep 6, 2007 6:21 pm

hey, if you're on DA, you should join the club and submit it as an entry! (i'm the owner of the club.... shameless plug, lol)

nomonkey  (Reply)

Total Posts: 43

Sep 7, 2007 6:34 pm

i don't know. i'm on DA but i don't really know if i shoud. i never really win/

irish  (Reply)

Total Posts: 41

Sep 10, 2007 10:31 pm

It's not about winning... it's about having fun with the topic and challenge.

nomonkey  (Reply)

Total Posts: 43

Sep 11, 2007 11:57 am

yeah good point. but i don't think i'll have time this week. i have to study for up comming test and i step.

Inu Hanyou Nikkie

Total Posts: 182

Sep 5, 2007 3:59 pm

Evvvviiillllll! I love it!! FemInu is too cute and cuddly and MalKag is so grumpy at the affection! Loves it! Inu's ear twitching is also very adorable!

Would love to see the deflation/blow out of Kouga's ego when he sees Male Kagome!

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"There is nothing more delicious than writing the first words to a story.." Beatrix Potter

Sokushitsu

Total Posts: 54

May 1, 2008 2:39 pm

That would be one scary gf to have---I think in reverse it would be like Tenchi to Ryoko........overzealous...."kagome" trying to resist but deep down wanting it? ehhehe!


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