Critiques for "Sacrifice"

Attached a crit of the body and how I think it should be (approx). Your biggest issues are- lower back (needs an S curve- yours is flat so it looks huge), the buttocks (my crit isn't too much better though- you'll figure it out though- right? The issue is the buttock is a female one) the right thigh is too long and the raised hand's thumb starts too far down the hand. My crit demonstrates this. There's some clothing issues too, but those would be the biggest things bugging you

Thank you! <3 That definitely helps a ton! I'll probably be editing it today or tomorrow to change those things. <3

I think you're right about those being the biggest thing bothering me. ^^ What clothing issues did you spot? For some reason I'm horrible at figuring out what's wrong with my own drawings.

Clothing issues are mostly that bottom half- it look like heavy fabric yet it doesn't drape. In a sitting position, it'd crumple up to the groin. Specially since we can't see it's full shape.The top should drape a bit more too- specially on the shoulders where the beads are load bearing for the top.

I agree with te cloud filter looking bad in this case. Cloud filters are a weird thing to play with. At a close range, they look bad. I used a cloud filter on this picture, and it works cause its not the main focus and the gradient map on top of it has given it a dynamic. You need to watch that with filters- they're easy, but look tacky if they're obviously a filter. Seriously- a large white brush at 5% opacity or something is more effective. Maybe some glittery bits randomly.

The other comment about composition is very true too. I don't want to go too far into it cause frankly, there is no clean cut rule, and there are ALOT of rules. http://www.silverlight.co.uk/tutorials/compose_expose/thirds.html This is the most BASIC of all rules that everyone should learn. The rule of thirds. Read that, and re look at the pic. There's alot more than that to composition, cause you don't always have to fill the picture with your subject- as long as it's clear what the subject is. A person, object, feeling- ANY thing. Attached a visual crit of some non linear flow lines. The first shows the rule of thirds emphasising the eye by it being central (ish) and in the top third line. The second is repetitious, but has a yin yang flow line- the contrast of the picture. The 3rd is a little lopsided cause it's unfinished, but is a heart in it's flow lines. The heart is also around their face which shows adoration and their hands.

Donno- getting tired. I think this is my last comment for today T.T Too early in the morning

*wanders off to bed*

There're two things, I think, that I could put my finger on:
1) Composition: I think it's better to have the figure more towards the bottom if you are going to leave the picture with lots of empty space; that way the weight is towards the bottom and the pic doesn't feel like toppling over.
2) The cloudy texture: it seems very computer-generated, very straight from the Photoshop effect tools. I think manually hand-drawn clouds be better- altho more effort need to be spent.

Other than that, I think it's pretty good; I like the color composition. My sister is complaining about clothing for a guy- though one might argue that's up to the artist right to design.

I hadn't noticed that before on the composition, but you're definitely right. I don't think I'll change that on this one, but I'll definitely keep than in mind for the future. ^^

I actually did draw out the texture by hand (couldn't get brushes to work for some reason), it just didn't come out very well at all. I'm still figuring that part out. <3

Heh, usually I'd agree on the clothes. In this case it's a mix of me having fun and his culture coming into play. They partially change shape, so the skirt is there for modesty's sake after switching from fin to legs. Boots and gloves are because they have an ever changing code on wrists/ankles that work like a true name in Sidhe myths. XD

Thank you! <3

I like the background and how it makes you feel. The girl is also very pretty. Though there is somthing odd about her knee and how the hand is placed. Perhaps it just needs a bit more shadow. Sorry Im not more help