Critiques for "First Flight"

This is beautiful. The whole scene is stunning, the anatomy is great, and wow, those wings are gorgeous. Feather work unbelievable. My only complaint is that I wish it were larger! Lovely.

Thank you This was my first time using the Wacom Tablet. *hugs it* I feel like I've improved vastly since I bought it.

Glad you like. Yea, larger is always better. I have prints for sale though. This is one of them. Let me know.

Wow, your first time using a tablet...that's an INCREDIBLE piece for your first time

lol, thanks. It kind of took me by surprise as well. I saw everyone else using them, but I never considered the possibility for myself. Now I just love it.

it's a bird, it's a plane

well the first one was sort of right

Great pic , wats the novel about? i'm intrigued to know more

Well, see there's this kid. And he gets eaten and that's the end....Na just kidding.

In a nutshell, trilogy summary...dum dum dum.

Orphaned and alone, a young boy must discover what he is and where he came from in order to stop a growing Darkness and the first Black Unicorn.

Glad you like. I plan to write 6 books...ouch. Only one done. I posted first two chapters while the others are being edited

this is beautifully painted.

Thank you

love it! the wings are awesome!

Thank ye