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pazazzTotal Posts: 544Nov 12, 2007 3:31 pmA very dramatic piece, I am surprised you did not get more feedback on it. I like the composition and the font that you chose is easy on the eyes making it easy to read. I think the characters are well done and interesting, but some darker values would have helped to make this piece even more appealing. Great job, thanks for sharing it with us. |
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CaptainLupin (Reply)Total Posts: 5Nov 12, 2007 3:51 pmThanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it. ^-^ And yes, I realize some darker values would've helped now, but I had finished this in the earlier months of the year during the spring. I might do another piece like this, though, and I'll take the advice of making darker shadows here and there. <3 Thank you again for the critique! --- Optimus Prime requests that while you're in Hell, you give his regards to Megatron. |
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