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pazazz

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Nov 12, 2007 3:31 pm

A very dramatic piece, I am surprised you did not get more feedback on it. I like the composition and the font that you chose is easy on the eyes making it easy to read. I think the characters are well done and interesting, but some darker values would have helped to make this piece even more appealing. Great job, thanks for sharing it with us.

CaptainLupin  (Reply)

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Nov 12, 2007 3:51 pm

Thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it. ^-^ And yes, I realize some darker values would've helped now, but I had finished this in the earlier months of the year during the spring. I might do another piece like this, though, and I'll take the advice of making darker shadows here and there. <3 Thank you again for the critique! [emoticon]

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