Critiques for "Vegeta+Bulma - Tender Touch"

Looks good.

Thank you Dollmaker

You're welcome. ^.^

*takes a breath* The hand has fingers that are not smooth, and the pinky starts further off the hand than the other fingers if you where to line the curve of the knuckles up.
The skirt.. sorta crops off the leg. Making things bulge. If you where to draw a smooth line of where the leg starts from the hip and come down. then the skirt will hang better and the legs will look much smoother.

I love vegeta...

Thank you for the crit Lacewing. It was very helpful.

Thanks. I have a hard time doing written crits, often I will print out the image, draw over it.. and scan it back

yeah i like having drawn crits. it makes it easier to understand often times. thanks again! I'll have an updated drawing up within the next couple days.

Awesome I look forward to seeing it

sigh...he still is the hottest, I totally agree. I think I'll always have a thing for Vegeta.
I dont see anything wrong with this pic, I think it's perfect. I cant wait to see the coloured version.

Great!

Thanks for the comments Lili

I always love how you draw these too- your style makes Vege seem such a calmer, nicer person, and Bulma is very femanine ^^ *snuggles BR* so happy to see you drawing again ^^ I miss it

*snuggles back* Thanks Arkillian. I think maybe I need to do some more drawings where he's a little more badass.

Awe- there's tons of those about the place- I like your cocky, 'I'm so sexy' version of Vege alot more It seems so perfect for his character ^^

Hahah there's only one proper response to that:
"Jiita Clothing Line. So sexy, even YOU will f***"

J-T-taaaaaaa

*waggles tongue*

*rawr*

I love how their bodies are constructed and how you did Bulma's hair. The only thing to me that stands out is Bulma's hand Her pinky specifically I might be a tad short. But over all very nice. I'm glad to see that you're drawing again

Thanks for the comments Jill. I'll probably have a revised drawing up soon.

Sure thing ^_^ I'll keep an eye out for it

This is beautiful. I've always liked the way that you draw Bejita. The pose is interesting too. The way you draw people...I dunno, almost like they're always floating in air. It creates a nice effect.

Thank you for the comments Song. I appreciate it a lot ^.^

nice

Thanks for the comments