Critiques for "Don't Leave Me: Final"

Absolutely gorgeous!

A very touching moment in young Zuko's life. The photo you incorporated of the sky adds to this nicely.

Beautiful work! It's especially nice to see a moment between Ursa and young Zuko, since I haven't seen much fanart of her. I like how you've managed to get the photo to blend in so well. Photo backgrounds usually look tacked on to me but I actually didn't realise that it was a photo at first!

Critique(s):

- If you've got the time then I think you could do with adding some more shading and details to the buildings and landscape in the background. It just looks a bit flat when compared to the cell-shaded look of the characters in the foreground.

- Ursa's right hand looks a bit odd. The ring finger is too tapered and the first two fingers appear to be fused together.

- The line between Ursa's sleeve and Zuko's leg is also a bit off. Try making the edge of her sleeve a little more rounded.

Wow, beautiful. I love the simple lines, but it still has detail.