Critiques for "Golden innocene"

Those eyes are rather terrifying! I really love the concept of this, but I feel you could have been a little more robust in you shading, which would have rounded out the cheeks and nose. Also, the drawing of those eyes are a bit skewed. I respect that you did this all with a mouse, but your tools are really limiting you.

Thank you. Not only did I do this with a crappy mouse but at neondragonart.com which is an oekaki board. I see what you mean about the eyes and the shading, I will definately fix that when I get my tablet and my photoshop working.
I have both but both are being not nice with Vista. I was actually afraid of going darker with the shading, I thought it would ruin her for some reason. Beside the skew-eyness of the the eyes why do you think they are so terrifying?

The fact that the pupils don't touch the eyelid make her expression very intense. It's not necessarily a bad thing, just something to be aware of.

oh, You're right, I never noticed. I have a lot to learn, thank you. When I get a free moment I am gonna try again, only this time with an unlimited pallet.