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Nataly Bild

Total Posts: 204

Dec 13, 2007 8:29 pm

I like the way you've done the background - it's really great so you may be proud of it. The characters are also great.

However when look not at the details but at the pic all together the characters look very artificial though the background seems very natural. And one more - it seems that the unicorn hangs over the ground but not stands on it.

Nevetherless I like the work you've done. [emoticon]

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I'm not a wizard yet - I'm only studying.

Pegasicorn  (Reply)

Total Posts: 35

Dec 13, 2007 8:46 pm

Thas part of my style--I like making the background more detailed than the characters, sort of like you find in an animated movie. =] Plus once I started, I couldn't stop my tendency to go overboard with the details. Whoops. XD;
As for the unicorn (who's actually a pegacorn, but I can understand the mistake; his wings are hidden XD; ), I tried to make him look like he's walking a little farther back, but couldn't quite get it. Need to work on perspective more. ^^;
Thanks for the comment and compliments! =]

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A leopard/wolf youkai, named for an equine, who acts like a cat.
Can we say "identity crisis"?

Nataly Bild  (Reply)

Total Posts: 204

Dec 14, 2007 8:53 am

You are always welcome. [emoticon]
As for the combination of background and the characters that's great you have some peculiarity of the style.
As for the pegacorn (sorry for misunderstanding) perhaps you need to make the ground under its hooves more detailed?

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I'm not a wizard yet - I'm only studying.

Pegasicorn  (Reply)

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Dec 14, 2007 3:34 pm

I'm not too sure how I would do that. [emoticon]

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A leopard/wolf youkai, named for an equine, who acts like a cat.
Can we say "identity crisis"?

Nataly Bild  (Reply)

Total Posts: 204

Dec 14, 2007 10:11 pm

It's up to you.

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I'm not a wizard yet - I'm only studying.

blackwingedangel

Total Posts: 224

Jan 23, 2008 12:51 am

I love this,great background and some very cute characters.

Pegasicorn  (Reply)

Total Posts: 35

Jan 23, 2008 2:01 pm

Thank you. [emoticon]

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A leopard/wolf youkai, named for an equine, who acts like a cat.
Can we say "identity crisis"?

blackwingedangel  (Reply)

Total Posts: 224

Jan 23, 2008 2:43 pm

most welcome,a nice pic


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