Critiques for "Arkillian Secret Santa"

This is so nice. It really works up my anticipation for my SSanta gift- who will it be...

The only thing I can see off quick to improve would be the guy's left foot- which seems a bit too twisted in contrast to his whole body.

Thank you for the comments Puayen. I'll fix that foot.

*flails hands happily*
OMGS!! That is a shocker! We've know each other for ages- I thought I was going to get one of the newbees XD (Due to chance ) Luls This looks really pretty BR- and it is REALLY cool to see you drawing again I can't think of the last pic you posted- and what a pic! The two of them look so wonderful together ^^ I like how Athena has the elegant sword

Critique... um... Not sure what you have planned for Alex's left hand- looks like it should be holding something- is it?

*picks up stranded pieces of Alex's clothing and fangirls*

WEEEEEEEE!!!! OMGs- this is totally awesome ^^

Yayz. I'm glad you like it!

I wasn't sure what you'd think of Athena's sword because I didn't see any weapons for her in your gallery but you did draw her with armor before and I really liked the armor you designed for her.

I'll fix that hand. It's not meant to hold anything. I was just trying to find a good pose for it. I'll revise it.

Athena is primarily a staff fighter, but I suck at fighting pictures, so I don't draw her staff fighting much ^^; I should do though ^^ Swords work better in this picture though cause Alex has one though She's very much a fighter. Despite the pics I draw of her, she's a very angry, man hating woman. She was born with blond hair, which in her country is a bad thing cause they kill off blond boys- and blond girls tend to give birth to blond boys, so they have a lack of appeal. She has another family issue though which makes her an outcast though >.> that's all plot though... XD

involved, much?

What do you mean? Involved what much ^^; *pats poor tired BR*

your characters are complicated is all i meant. you've got a lot of back story for them

It's gonna be a novel BIGGER than Harry potter when I'm done with it You watch me- i'll be the next JK Rowling :sarcastic:

No really- I've been writing Dragon twins since I was 12- It takes OVER 2 hours to tell you about my story- and even then, I'll miss out a heap cause of WIP stuff, or stuff I forget. Very few people actually know what the full deal with the world is. Like- my writers for Slayer's Game. Even then, they have to confer with me ^^; Luls. Athena has been around since I was... maybe 15... In the story, Edward dies, and gets reincarnated into a girl, which is why she's so similar to Edward in colour, but I hated her being part of the dragon family, but liked her relationship with Alex- she's the only character I ever HAVE liked with Alex. She's VERY out going. In my story, she was into running- she still is. I just gave her a few issues to compliment the world XD

You want in depth? Try Bryan and the gods. All of them. THEY have major background story. Bryan has layers too. I don't know if anyone could write him but me ^^; He's so bipolar and cold ^^;

OMG! What a coincidence that your her SS that's funny XD But anyway this is just beautifully drawn especially the clothes and the swords. Once again you've done a fantastic job There's nothing really for me to roast so I'll just stare for a while XD

thanks for the comments Jill

Oooo,
Prettiful.
Can't wait to see it finished.

thanks for the comments

No problem.
(Winkie)

*preens pikcha* :3

I really like the poses on this. It's like she's stopping him from falling with her touch. She's got such an expression of tenderness on her face too...I love dreamy pieces with flowing hair etc - ^.^

Not alot i can see to critique......I thought perhaps his left hand looked a bit odd, like it the fingers should be more relaxed...but I think that's more personal taste than anything else.

Can't wait to see it coloured!