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pazazz

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Jan 2, 2008 2:19 pm

The composition here is interesting, you did a fine job depicting movement and I like the little details you added. The background sky seems a bit too red for me, but that is just a personal choice. The character on the left hand side, has a head that looks way too big for his body and it looks like a dome instead of a nice oval. There are places where you could have placed more darker values for added drama, and a cast shadow on the ground would have married them to the background. Nice work, thanks for sharing it with us.

Anbu Kakashi  (Reply)

Total Posts: 25

Jan 4, 2008 9:26 am

Thank you for your comment, it's really rare to get any useful comments ^^; It helped me a lot m(._.)m

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