Online: 2 members, 19 guests
|
|
pazazzTotal Posts: 528Jan 2, 2008 2:19 pmThe composition here is interesting, you did a fine job depicting movement and I like the little details you added. The background sky seems a bit too red for me, but that is just a personal choice. The character on the left hand side, has a head that looks way too big for his body and it looks like a dome instead of a nice oval. There are places where you could have placed more darker values for added drama, and a cast shadow on the ground would have married them to the background. Nice work, thanks for sharing it with us. |
|
|
Anbu Kakashi (Reply)Total Posts: 25Jan 4, 2008 9:26 amThank you for your comment, it's really rare to get any useful comments ^^; It helped me a lot m(._.)m --- Computer price $1000 dollars,internet a moth price $35 dollars,reading negative comment from a spoiled untalented kid its priceless. |
| Return | Write a Critique | Read Critiques |