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pazazz

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Jan 16, 2008 5:29 am

Nice! I think all that this piece needs to really pop, are some nice really dark values in the places of deepest shadow. The nose ring and lip piercing seem out of place with the rest of the piece as they are "worked" more in regards to shading. They would also cast a shadow on the skin and it is missing. The nose looks rather flat and needs some shading as well. I would love to see the rest of this character, thanks for sharing.

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~Praginfly~  (Reply)

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Jan 18, 2008 11:15 am

ah thanks hun, well when it comes to art...XD i am lazy as hell with coloring so i dunno if i will change anything but ty for the advice

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