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pazazz

Total Posts: 460

Jan 23, 2008 6:00 pm

The wings are very pretty, I like the way you blended the colors and your choice of color. Maybe you could make them seem less pointed at the ends, a little more rounded or curved/tapered like a real butterflies. Her arms seem a bit long, the hands look like they would hit her leg down at her knees, when they should hit at the upper thighs. Her outfit looks like it would flow very nicely when she takes off in flight. Nice work, thanks for sharing it with us.

Altaike  (Reply)

Total Posts: 14

Jan 25, 2008 3:11 pm

Thank you! <3

You're right, I definitely need to shorten her arm, I'm usually better at judging length than that XD And I hadn't thought about that with the wings but that might make them look quite a bit more natural. Thanks!


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