Critiques for "Spider King - Character Sketch"

Saw the finished version on the yahoogroup, hehe. It looks great

I like the idea you're having. It's true that in most stories females are the ones of a spider story. *points at Drow* The reverse sounds really cool.

If you do add him to your story, that will be awesome.

If I do add him, I'm thinking it either would be a story to itself, or maybe somewhere in the third book due to the upcoming war. Poor Keith will need backup against the forces of a dark unicorn. I guess...hadn't' thought that far yet, hehe. Thanks though.